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Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 04:01 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Loved it! You had me rolling! ^_^ I loved the joking between Spike, Angel and Buffy.


Author's Response: Hi Bryntrev - glad the laughing was infectious for you too!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:23 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

“I will do, Brad,” said Buffy with a smile, “Perhaps there can be oil involved?”

“Bloody hell, woman,” muttered Spike, making both Buffy and Brad laugh.

LOL!! Loved it.

The the cliffhanger! I'd better wake up and find an update to this story, woman! Yes, that's an order.

I want to know what comes after the ... and I want to know NOW! : )

Author's Response: the oil involved line is ripped from episode in S7 where A and S are jealous of each other!! lol - thought it fit quite well!!

Reviewer: lilladybug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Ahhh! Killing me with the ellipses at the end!!


Love how you capture Spike's personality...he's moody at times, but always the same guy inside :D

Author's Response: hey there lilladybug! how ya doing? I just love leaving things hanging!! lol!! thanks for saying that I'm capturing spike's personality :) it means a lot!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 08:26 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Bugger I've read from the beginning and now I've finished and - I NEED MORE. Love it.

Author's Response: What a day to start reading!!! Ends on a cliffhanger!! Glad you've found it and not sure if you're familiar with me or not but i update v quickly so you won't have long to wait!! :) thanks for letting me know!!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 06:33 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Oh man, you can`t do this to me! More! Please! I`m begging! What about the prophecy???

Author's Response: *chuckles evilly* did I tell you that I'm going away for a week...? Just kidding - more when it's back from my lovely beta Carol!! :) Couldn't resist it! :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 04:54 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

that was an evil ending!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hi shelly - i know!! But I just couldn't resist it! it's been so long since we had a really good cliffie!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Yeah you're a busy bee and so is your beta :)
Wouldn't want to have it in another way :))
Eating breakfast together is always better, it tastes better.
And another misunderstanding out of the way. Good that at last Buffy treats him normal :)
Evil cliffhanger though even if I can guess what's that about.

Author's Response: You know me too well and there have been plenty of clues along the way:) It was important to get B and A being normal with him - he's used to spats and banter and being humoured just demeans him! :) More soon! x

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:22 pm Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

I was actually talking about Angel moving around the building during the day time. I remember S's room being shady and the main entrance in the shade, but A had to go through corridor's to Moira's and then to the lunch with her, etc. The possibility of it makes me think that Rosendale is really a dim castle. Because all modern buildings have corridors and cafeterias with large windows. Though I guess, it does not really matter. Now, I REALLY want to know what Angel and Giles discovered! :)
Spuffy, I don't think Brad did not notice, he was just discreet.

Author's Response: Think Brad has probably seen it all before!! LOL!! In my head (being English) the old part of Rosedene is like old country house which would have dark corridors - it's not a modern building and so Angel's safe as long as he watches his step!! LOL!! Won't keep you waiting too long I promise!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:53 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Ohhhh, evil cliffie! Update soon please, I really liked the interaction between all three of them and loved how Spike had even his last doubts about why Buffy is with him dispelled!

More now, please!!!
*hugs*

Author's Response: It's been a while since i had a good cliffie so i shall savour it for a moment!! *evil grin* But won't keep you waiting too long! :) *hugs*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 11:17 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

ho come on!!! a) you didnt updated yesterday!! then you finish the chapter like that!!! what the hell were you thinking?!?!?!?!?!?!? i want more!! (so much more!!) . anyway angel laughing.... that a sight that i didnt think ill see!! .
"poor" spike having buffy give him a massage! lol. i just dont understand how brad didnt see the.... affects of buffy touching him! :)

Author's Response: Sorry about missing yesterday! didn't get time to do it! working:( I thikn spike turned over just in time to avoid Brad spotting his problem!! :) Just couldn't resist the cliffie!! :)

Reviewer: Serinah Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:32 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

oh, god, update, ye sod!! lol. Anyway, I'm afraid I've been betaing all day straight yesterday, so sorry about this but I have 2 comments.
1- I'm not sure that Daniel using words 'attempted suicide' in front of Spike was professional. Unless he did it on purpose to make him feel sth or other. But even then it should be Moira's work I think. But maybe it just shows what I know.
2 - I expected the Rosendale building would have plenty of large windows. Or at least normal windows. How come Angel is there during the day and walking around as he wishes?
On that note let me assure you that you are still a good writer and I love your stories. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: hi there! Fair comment about Daniel the doctor - but just figured he was a professional and was just commenting on what had happened but yeah - not big with the bedside manner! lol!! As for Rosedene - the rooms are huge like an english stately home so have lots of dark spaces and corners! and i did say that Spike's room was at the front and the front is shaded in the morning so that would help the dimness. sorry i didn't say that Angel sat in a shadey spot - just took that as a given, bad writer to presume anything! that's also why he can get in in the mornings without trouble as mentioned in previous chapter.glad you still think i'm okay! :) thanks for your comments!!! See you in the next chapter I hope!! :) couldn't resist the cliffie!!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 07:08 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

naww Mable! You cant leave us there! Love it as usual.

Author's Response: Sorry puska! Couldn't resist -thanks for saying that you loved it! *big grin*

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 06:44 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

You just had to leave it at a cliffy didn't you. Loved it like always.

Author's Response: *big grin* for letting me know that you loved it!! sorry about the cliffie - just couldn't resist! LOL!!

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