Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 03:33 am Title: Making A Splash

aww, i love that last line. Its good to see Spike regaining his confidence. Great stuff hon!

Author's Response: Thanks puska! Had to nip back to see what the last line was! tee hee! Yes B has always been able to push spike's buttons!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 07:45 pm Title: Making A Splash

Another beautiful update! Keep them coming honey! I was delighted at how Buffy helped him overcome his fear even as I felt sorry for him for bearing the weight of his dad's loss on his shoulders!

*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks Sotia, glad you liked it :) I like saying why Spike's dad wasn't around - did it in UV too! more soon! *hugs back*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: Making A Splash

Oh that ... Brad wanted to take Spike swimming. That would in fact help his legs without hurting Spike. Didn't expect Spike's past with the water. It takes courage to go in the water with that fear (bad memories).
Fun, Buffy teasing Spike with the swimming trunks *gg*
Enjoyed the read.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it Cordyk! :) thought of Spike in surfer dude shorts tickled me!! personally i wish he'd opted for the black pair!! lol! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 03:26 pm Title: Making A Splash

Great chapter, as always!
Loved your use of canon. Explaining Spike's fear of water and then having Buffy helping him with her own fear. I especially liked how you used the sub - that *so* sounds like somthing Angel would have done. (plus one of my all-time favorite scenes is when Spike does the "You can just swab my deck" LOL and God he looks so adorable in that uniform... hmmm....) Okay... I'm digressing... back to review...
Also the First Evil "drowning" - had to be a reason they did that since vampires can't drown.
*hugs*

Author's Response: I nearly forgot about the submarine ! Then when i remembered nearly scrapped the chapter! then managed to work it in - Spike with black hair looked sooo different didn't he? So glad you liked it! :) Thakns for letting me know.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2008 - 02:15 pm Title: Making A Splash

Fab chapter and Buffy knows exactly how to manipulate Spike into getting her way - loved it.

Author's Response: Buffy plays poor spike like a fiddle - but he wouldn't have it any other way! :) thanks for taking the time to review :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 09:25 pm Title: Making A Splash

Loved that, the way his dad died was interesting and I liked the aquaphobia.

Author's Response: Glad that you loved it! Thought it would be good to show why his dad wasn't around when he was turned! :) thanks for letting me know!

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