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Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2008 - 03:15 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I'm still having trouble getting used to this Angel!
I do like that he is trying to help Spike and Buffy though.
I love how you blend canon/non-canon and your character dialogue. Your miror reference (Spike saying how Buffy would worry about her ass looking was dead on! LOL) and then the Thanksgiving reference. Having Buffy driving the Viper. Spike's coat in the closet - and it being too clean.
Great chapter as always. :)
Hope your mares/foals are doing well. I'm sure that is exhausting work! :)

Author's Response: Well, I'm not a big Angel fan so I decided to make him nice!! lol!! Sonce he had to be around so much!! Plus Spike and Buffy are all he has left!! Glad you liked all the references to canon! The mares are hanging on to their babies this yr - keep going over due which means we have to sit up more often!! If floors me but will soon be over!! :) thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 06:44 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

I love the banter between the three of them. It sounds like something straight out of the show. Love it.

And good luck with the horsey's. I have some myself and they're great fun! (though sitting up with them must be tiring)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :) I love writng dialogue :) The sitting up does seem so bad if they foal - it passes the time and keeps you awake - but when they don't it really knocks me for six!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 01:31 am Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Great chapter Mabel , really enjoyed it. It's that shanky ho Dru , isn't it? She spotted them and has now follwed them, It wasn't the disgusting Immortal because he/she said Spike , the immortal (Pooey) would have said Buffy name, so it is Dru right ? Oh what am i doing , you won't tell me anyway . I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter so those foal's better hurry up and foal already ( I bet there adorable) so you can write some more. Til next time.

Author's Response: Hi Jo! glad you liked the chapter :) You're right that I won't tell you who or should that be what the stalker is!! :) Thanks for reviewing. BTW some of the foals are cute but one I'm sure is the spawn of the devil!! Tee hee!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 07:14 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK I'm officially stumped with who the mystery being is - and don't you just love that?!! Loved it as ever.

Author's Response: You're stumped...what about me...? Tee hee! Seriously though, you won't find out for a little while!! Glad you liked the chapter and thanks for letting me know :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

OK, WHO IS THE FIGURE FOLLOWING THEM????

*pouts* I knew it wouldn't all be hearts and roses now on, wicked woman!

Hope RL clears up some,
*hugs*

Author's Response: thanks sotia! I love having my readers nervous! Will update asap!! but will the next chapter tell you who or what that is....? Tee hee! *sniggers evilly*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 04:58 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

love the chapter!
and you better update soon!!! i wanna know who is it!!! (the one that folowing him)

Author's Response: Hey spuffy! Will update as soon as I can but not sure that you'll find your answer in the next one!! Tee hee!!! ooh the suspense! *sniggers evilly* thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 04:13 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Glad to see Spike enjoying the water / doing better. I wouldn't have thought to worry that the pain gets less but he's right, they told them it was a sign for the healing. Hopefully it only means he is almost healed.
Angel did a lot of work; it will be good for Spike to be able on his own (=wheelchair) at the Hyperion. The fooling around (duster, wheelchair) was fun.
But I wonder who did follow them? Must be a human.
~ Looking forward to find out who it is (and to read more).

Author's Response: Thanks Cordyk! All will be revealed but maybe not right away!! lol!!! Thanks for your reviews always look forward to them :)

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2008 - 03:27 pm Title: Peaches Has Been Busy

Angel is being such a sweety. Can you play matchmaker for him? He needs a nice girl. I absolutely love the Spuffy domestic bliss they've go going on although I am a little nervous about this mysterious new arrival.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! I have plans for Angel! More about that later! As for the mystery person/creature/thing...lol!! Time will tell - but nervous is just how I like my readers!! Thanks for taking the time to review Francine - it's always appreciated :)

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