[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: Gone!
OMG Mabel you have me worried about him like crazy, although I still think it's Dru that has him. She better keep her teeth off if that's the case , skanky ho. Update soon i'm on pins and needles here.
Author's Response: Hi Jo!! Updating later today I promise!! :) Sorry about making you worry!! (well I'm not really cos I'm evil!!! tee hee) *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: Gone!
Yeah, Angel noticed correctly, Brad saw him. But sadly they have not witness, no clues. It won't be so easy to find something out I fear. But I hope they'll find something, regardless what I'm thinking.
More please :))
Author's Response: won't keep you waiting too long!! :) I'm hoping that no one has guessed what i'm up to !!! tee hee :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Gone!
Yes, if Moira has good instincts and she trusts them, then I guess her behaviour is justified. I just did not see that. I did not call your characters' reasonings lame, sorry if what's you read out of it, it's not what I meant. :( Brad on the other hand, has seen the 'face', he's not thinking clearly. Laura naturally does what he does. Feminist notions aside, women tend to do that. ;)
Author's Response: it's okay serinah it was me saying it was a bit lame - not thinking you were implying that!! i'm my own worse critic and it was a weak part of the chapter! :) :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:57 pm Title: Gone!
ooh!! action! I'm glad Brad's got a sample of Angel's true face. Soon they might all know! :) But I don't understand one thing. First A says that it's not safe for them to stay and they should go home and then they talk about them staying? Angel and Buffy don't even fight it. How come Brad and Moira agreed not to call police, they are professionals in health care. It's highly unconvincing for me. I think you should give them some incentive. Angel could tell them, that it's actually *is* police or FBI matter or whatever. Right now I think that at least Moira is risking her good reputation. It is her duty to call the police even if it did not happen in her facility. And well, then there's conscience. Will a good person agree not to call the police like that? I doubt that. Aside from that, thanks for updating, I hope to read more soon! And did I mention that I'm really, *really* happy that the story turned to have more to it than just a tale of S's recovery? Well, I am glad. :)
Author's Response: Hi Serinah! Glad you're liking that I put a bit of action in here! I get what you mean about the 'normals' response but in my head Moira knows that something is not quite 'normal' with Angel and Spike and is just trusting her gut! Sorry if it came over a bit lame!!! Tee hee!! thanks as always for your comments! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:31 pm Title: Gone!
No, no, my Spike is gone. Cries for my Spike. Maybe whoever has him doesn't want to hurt him. Maybe whoever has him just wanted him. Wishful thinking I know. But Spike has come so far with his healing. Don't know if he can take a beating. I just hope Dru isn't behind this. Cause writers always make it Dru. I hope it is someone different. Not to say that I won't like your story if it is Dru.
I love Brad in this story. He seems to care for Spike a lot. They have form a great friendship. I always love to read a story where Spike makes a new friend. I guess because he just seem so lonely on Buffy and Angel sometimes. My heart went out to him.
Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you're enjoying it and that you like Brad! He's a good guy. :) cna't say who's got Spike just yet but it won't be long before you find out. I promise! if you haven't read my fic Changing Lives give it a go - Spike makes a good friend in that one too!! :) Sorry for the shameful hint to read it!! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 03:17 pm Title: Gone!
I want them to find him stat! *pouts* Only good thig is if whoever has Spike wanted him dead they'd prolly have killed him on the spot, so there's hope... Please update soon!!!
*hugs*
PS“God, you sound like one of those self-sacrificing heroes in a bad action movie. I have the weekend off and since this is a hotel I’m presuming that you’ll have a room I can use?”
GO MOIRA!!!
Author's Response: Yeah i'm glad you picked up on that line! Moira a strong woman!! Won't keep you waiting too long!!! :) *big hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Gone!
Just read the 3 last updates in a row and I have to say I didn`t expect this to happen but it`s mind blowing! I just hope Spike won`t get hurt again, he suffered too much already. I don`t like seeing him weak.
Author's Response: Hi there Maddonna!!! Love that you didn't see it coming! Can't say any more just yet!! Tee hee!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: Gone!
You are *evil evil evil*!!!!!
It must be Dru.
Update soon. Please.
*hugs*
Author's Response: I'm taking *evil* as a compliment!! Tee hee!! Won't keep you waiting long but as for whether it's Dru or not...? Time will tell!! :) *hugs back*
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 12:26 pm Title: Gone!
Good lord woman! I'm gone for a little while and this is what happens!! They have to find Spike!
Great stuff!
Author's Response: You should know me by now puska - turn your back for a second and all hell could break out!! Tee hee! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:59 am Title: Gone!
Great chapter - I love it!
Author's Response: Hi michelle D - glad you loved it!! More soon! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Gone!
Oooooh, who took Spike???
Can't wait to see who it was and what the "Normals" find out ;)
Author's Response: Hi Avalon! You'll have to wait to find out!! tee hee!! :) thanks for reviewing
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