Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2008 - 02:14 pm Title: Viewing Day

Hooray for George!!!
The collar scene - especially the part about leaving the mug outside the door - was truly "bent". I liked it! :) hee hee The oil and Spike getting "demonhandled" and pre-customized was all good for a pre-rescue. I'm glad you didn't prolong the agony by having the Polgara demon win Spike or anything though - or at least I'm hoping you don't!
(And I always always mean *evil* as a compliment!)
*hugs*

Author's Response: ...was truly "bent".... that made me chuckle!! My best pal worries for my mind!! Tee hee!! It's a good job that 'evil' is a compliment - I'm getting it alot!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2008 - 09:06 am Title: Viewing Day

See, now, I feel stupid! I'd missed this chapter and I thought I was being super cool guessing that George was there to help in the next one! *smacks forehead repeatedly*

Off to read the latest update!

*huggles*

Author's Response: you're still super cool hun!! Tee hee!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 05:23 pm Title: Viewing Day

Oh my, you're really torturing Spike in this chapter.
It's more then time that they'll get him out there. :(
Seems they have a clue now. It's time indeed because Spike would be sold then and god knows how much hurt/harmed.

Author's Response: that's as bad as it gets! Hopefully the gang will get there in time....:)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 04:35 pm Title: Viewing Day

Great chapter. I just wanted to say that I figured out your system for naming the your name demons for this fic. Very clever, you. : )

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter - think I've squicked a few readers out a bit!! But it's mostly been threats!! Not a bad way to come up with weird names huh? Tee hee!! Did the cyber twin thing a bit with the name George - but couldn't think of anything else 'normal' enough for him!! LOL!!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: Viewing Day

I am glad that Spike will be found (I hope) but I hope that he will not be so far gone mentally that he will be able to tell them about the collar. Also, I hope we don't get to the point that Spike will be castrated or have part of his leg cut off. I know the title is loss of pride but that would be going to far.

Author's Response: Rest assured Bridget - it's pride he's losing not limbs!!! Tee hee!! No way could I every have Spike losing bits!!! Just needed the threat to be there!! Good point about the collar tho.....

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 01:17 pm Title: Viewing Day

Your twists are getting more twisted! Poor Spike - you abuse him so...

I love Moira's and Laura's reaction to George.

Author's Response: My best friend does worry for my mind!! Tee hee!!! I love doing twisted twists!! Tee hee!! Glad you liked Laura and moira's reaction to little George!! LOL. I wasn't too hard on Spike was I....? tee hee!!! *Cackles evilly*

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 06:44 am Title: Viewing Day

Yay the rescue party is on the way, poor Spike the mental consequences of this are going to be hard to deal with.

Author's Response: Hi nicka, let's hope the rescue goes well....!! Tee hee!!! More soon! :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 06:38 am Title: Viewing Day

teehee, george sounds funny. Glad they've got a lead on where to find Spike. Great stuff Mabel. *hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks puska!! glad you liked!! Glad you liked George!! tee hee!! More soon! *big hugs*

Reviewer: Francine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 02:22 am Title: Viewing Day

Oh my gosh, you HAVE to update soon! Don't leave us hanging. *bites nails* Poor Spike, they just have to get to him on time.

Author's Response: Hi Francine!! Hope your nails survive!! Will update asap!!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2008 - 12:50 am Title: Viewing Day

OMG thank God for George, Hey! wait , who's George ?
Well I don't care just so they get Spike out of there in time. Then Spike can take those demons apart limb by bloody limb(thre goes my violent streak again) and i'll be right there with him! I'm still drinking until he's out of there, your responsible for all and any liver damage I sustain Mabel, Update soon with the rexcue, please.

Author's Response: you liver will soon be safe and so will Spike....or will he....? Tee hee!!

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