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Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2008 - 08:25 pm Title: Time Out

Argh - not the stinkin' bathroom scene!!! (Sorry!)
Great friendship between Brad and Spike. I love how he freaked out thinking that he really didn't want to know all that Spike had been through. (That would really freak Brad out, wouldn't it?)


Author's Response: Sorry for bringing up the bathroom scene!! LOL! I really enjoyed writing Brad, I love creating original characters as it's a challenge to get people to like them as they have no prior knowledge of them. I just thought how I'd react if I'd seen and hear what Brad had!! lol

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2008 - 01:26 pm Title: Time Out

hmm... very, very curious, how you'll explain the dream being real. But waking up with a wound... very freaky :)
BTW, about the retching, yeah, my bad; should've read more carefully.

Author's Response: Hi Serinah!! Glad that I've got you curious!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: Time Out

You're evil, evil, EVIL ...

But then, I don't really like writers that don't have a dark side, and because of the always coming sad surprises I definitely can't call your story boring.
As for this chapter: Are they just having shared dream, or have they somewhere in this story been linked? And if so, did we see it, just didn't notice anything, ore are there some higher powers putting they're noses were they don't belong?
As always we love Brad, but it would be nice to have one chapter or one part of a chapter with Angel and Nora, because it is kind of weird seeing Angel falling in love, if we haven't seen her character that much. I'm definitely like that pairing, but you may want to write something with them.

So my conclusion would be: Your EVIL, but in a GOOD way.

Author's Response: I can deal with being evil in a good way!!! lol!! My pal says she wories at how my mind works!! tee hee! Glad you're liking it and that it's full of surprises :) more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Time Out

It still would have been good if Spike talked with Moira; he needs a psychologist (counselor) to talk about his fears.
Weird dream he and Buffy shared.
And getting the old memories now? He really should talk to a counselor.

Author's Response: Hi Cordy! Yes Spike needs to start thinkiing like a human I guess!!! But you know what he's like.....tee hee. Thakns for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Kudagirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:58 pm Title: Time Out

Poor Spike. Body heals and his mind still needs to heal some. His awe about Buffy coming for him always touches my heart. He has been treated so badly by everyone in his live so he just expects no one to care. The dream helped him get a bit back. Love the story. No quick fixes.

Author's Response: So glad you're still loving it!! Ultimately all Spike ever needs is Buffy..... *hugs*

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:57 pm Title: Time Out

This story constantly keeps me on a roller coaster with its ups and downs. By the way I hate roller coasters. This is a great story though. Will the bad times never end for Spike? Thanks for the quick update.

Author's Response: *Chuckles* I hate riding roller coasters but can't seem to help writing them!!! Your death grip on the hand rail can ease a little soon!!! More tomorrow!! :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Time Out

Yep, you are an evil woman! Another cliffhanger! And how you torture these poor characters…

I am anxiously awaiting the next update. I can’t wait to see where you take this!

Author's Response: Hmm....evil eh? I think perhaps you're right!! LOL!! Not much more to come! Next chapter tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 02:44 pm Title: Time Out

Oh my God, you're making it all worse the moment it gets even a bit better! EVEEEEEL!!!!

Fix this, woman, I don't even DO angst, damit! I want puppies and hearts and roses!!! *breaks down and cries*

Author's Response: Hi sotia!! *hugest bear hug* to make it all better!!! You blooming well do DO angst now!! LOL!!! Will see if I can throw in some puppies and hearts and roses!!! lol!!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 01:53 pm Title: Time Out

oh no. The angst is building up again, lol. But I know this is how it goes, and will be ok in the end. I have faith. :)
Great stuff as usual Mabel, (btw I will be away on holidays for a week so I wont be reviewing, but I plan to as soon as I get back)
*hugs*

Author's Response: Hi there puska!! You're my 400th review for this fic!!! Thank you!!! There are only 2 more chapters so it will be complete when you get back! :) Have a great holiday!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 01:48 pm Title: Time Out

All getting very interesting. Love the way that Brad just accepts everything that happens. "He was trapped in the past" - literally or figuratively? Need an update now - PLEASE.

Author's Response: bit of both probably Sam! Tee hee!! More tomorrow!! Brad's a star!! I think I'm in love with him!!! LOL

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 01:43 pm Title: Time Out

ok! shocked with last two chapters. didn't expect these but I love it! :)
you surprise me everytime. are dreams like Slayer's dreams? they've showed them something dangerous in front of them?
hmmm....
so...when' the new chapter?
hi hi hi


Author's Response: Glad that I can keep surptising you this close to the end of the fic!! :) Thanks for reviewing! More tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Trisha B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2008 - 12:33 pm Title: Time Out

i'm actually happy that he finallt remembers why they tied him up. i was kinda getting sick of his whole they hurt my feelings thing. i do feel for him, but if it was angel and he hit buffy, he probably would have beat the crap out of him. still deeply in love with spike though. update soon

p.s. is buffy on the pill or are they using protection, b/c hhe is human now?!

Author's Response: The most pressing reason of him being tied up was of course to stop him hurting himself when desperate for Yenomi!! But he sure isn't a little innocent!!! As for the PS....... Tee hee!!! More tomorrow!!! Thanks for reviewing!

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