Reviews For A Loss Of Pride
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Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 04:57 pm Title: Captive Audience

I don't really understand the point of this diversion but I guess it will be explained. I understand that Spike killed the Polgara demons but I don't understand why you are making him addicted to this concoction as well as making him obedient. I am trusting that this will turn out alright without Spike having to suffer more than he already has.

Author's Response: The point of this diversion is probably buried somewhere in my mind!! lol!! Seriously it's all about pride - it's loss and then it being regained. Your trust won't be misplaced I promise! Thanks for reviewing Bridget it's appreciated. :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 04:03 pm Title: Captive Audience

Poor, poor, poor Spike. My heart aches for him. I'm sure that is how Buffy feels too and maybe Angel as well. Just when things were looking good for him. Now he is probably going to become a slave and he knows what is going to be done to him. Also, I'm afraid that he is going to be addicted to those drugs. Which is never good.

I love this story and I'm glad that you took us down another road. We all thought now that life is going to be to good for Spike. I guess not yet. But I have faith that eventually things will be good for Spike.

Author's Response: Hi there Guesty!! I'll give you a capital letter as seems rude otherwise!! Tee hee! Glad youl liked the added drama of the fic - if you've read any of my other stuff you'll know that things going well don't generally last too long! Tee hee!! Your faith won't be misplaced I promise you that! :) Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: maddonna001 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:41 pm Title: Captive Audience

I was afraid it was Dru who captured him but now I am more afraid. This Nemol guy turning him to a slave, that`s something that doesn`t fit Spike and it would totally take away the pride he has left. Poor Spike. Mabel, I love you original plot idea, keep going!

Author's Response: Hi there!! Just wanted to invent someone nasty for a change, all my orig characters so far have been nice!! lol!! Glad you liked the litle twist!! tee hee!! more soon! :) and thanks for talking about PRIDE cos that's a theme of the fic - he lost it - he found it - now he's having it taken away!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:10 pm Title: Captive Audience

Damn it Mabel , I wished it haf been Dru that took him now. Come on , things were going so well, you can't let this happen to him , to be used and raped and sold into slavery? Please let them find him before it happens and i hate when Spike's enslaved and used like that. DAMN I'm so pissed (not drunk) off over this turn of events . Save him, right now , save him. Uggh !your not gonna I know it ,know you! damn, damn, damn.

I need a drink!

Author's Response: Hi Jo, God I just love your reviews!! Hope you got your drink!!! Can't say more except to say trust me and remember the rating of this fic!! lol!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: CarolM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:08 pm Title: Captive Audience

This is continuing wonderfully Mabel, the pace is really hotting up.

Author's Response: Hi CarolM!! Glad you're liking it! I'm hoping to have it completed before Union Chapel! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 09:50 pm Title: Gone!

OMG Mabel you have me worried about him like crazy, although I still think it's Dru that has him. She better keep her teeth off if that's the case , skanky ho. Update soon i'm on pins and needles here.

Author's Response: Hi Jo!! Updating later today I promise!! :) Sorry about making you worry!! (well I'm not really cos I'm evil!!! tee hee) *hugs*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: Gone!

Yeah, Angel noticed correctly, Brad saw him. But sadly they have not witness, no clues. It won't be so easy to find something out I fear. But I hope they'll find something, regardless what I'm thinking.
More please :))

Author's Response: won't keep you waiting too long!! :) I'm hoping that no one has guessed what i'm up to !!! tee hee :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Gone!

Yes, if Moira has good instincts and she trusts them, then I guess her behaviour is justified. I just did not see that. I did not call your characters' reasonings lame, sorry if what's you read out of it, it's not what I meant. :( Brad on the other hand, has seen the 'face', he's not thinking clearly. Laura naturally does what he does. Feminist notions aside, women tend to do that. ;)

Author's Response: it's okay serinah it was me saying it was a bit lame - not thinking you were implying that!! i'm my own worse critic and it was a weak part of the chapter! :) :)

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:57 pm Title: Gone!

ooh!! action! I'm glad Brad's got a sample of Angel's true face. Soon they might all know! :) But I don't understand one thing. First A says that it's not safe for them to stay and they should go home and then they talk about them staying? Angel and Buffy don't even fight it. How come Brad and Moira agreed not to call police, they are professionals in health care. It's highly unconvincing for me. I think you should give them some incentive. Angel could tell them, that it's actually *is* police or FBI matter or whatever. Right now I think that at least Moira is risking her good reputation. It is her duty to call the police even if it did not happen in her facility. And well, then there's conscience. Will a good person agree not to call the police like that? I doubt that. Aside from that, thanks for updating, I hope to read more soon! And did I mention that I'm really, *really* happy that the story turned to have more to it than just a tale of S's recovery? Well, I am glad. :)

Author's Response: Hi Serinah! Glad you're liking that I put a bit of action in here! I get what you mean about the 'normals' response but in my head Moira knows that something is not quite 'normal' with Angel and Spike and is just trusting her gut! Sorry if it came over a bit lame!!! Tee hee!! thanks as always for your comments! :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:31 pm Title: Gone!

No, no, my Spike is gone. Cries for my Spike. Maybe whoever has him doesn't want to hurt him. Maybe whoever has him just wanted him. Wishful thinking I know. But Spike has come so far with his healing. Don't know if he can take a beating. I just hope Dru isn't behind this. Cause writers always make it Dru. I hope it is someone different. Not to say that I won't like your story if it is Dru.

I love Brad in this story. He seems to care for Spike a lot. They have form a great friendship. I always love to read a story where Spike makes a new friend. I guess because he just seem so lonely on Buffy and Angel sometimes. My heart went out to him.

Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you're enjoying it and that you like Brad! He's a good guy. :) cna't say who's got Spike just yet but it won't be long before you find out. I promise! if you haven't read my fic Changing Lives give it a go - Spike makes a good friend in that one too!! :) Sorry for the shameful hint to read it!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 03:17 pm Title: Gone!

I want them to find him stat! *pouts* Only good thig is if whoever has Spike wanted him dead they'd prolly have killed him on the spot, so there's hope... Please update soon!!!

*hugs*

PS“God, you sound like one of those self-sacrificing heroes in a bad action movie. I have the weekend off and since this is a hotel I’m presuming that you’ll have a room I can use?”
GO MOIRA!!!

Author's Response: Yeah i'm glad you picked up on that line! Moira a strong woman!! Won't keep you waiting too long!!! :) *big hugs*

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 03:01 pm Title: Gone!

Just read the 3 last updates in a row and I have to say I didn`t expect this to happen but it`s mind blowing! I just hope Spike won`t get hurt again, he suffered too much already. I don`t like seeing him weak.

Author's Response: Hi there Maddonna!!! Love that you didn't see it coming! Can't say any more just yet!! Tee hee!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: Gone!

You are *evil evil evil*!!!!!
It must be Dru.
Update soon. Please.
*hugs*

Author's Response: I'm taking *evil* as a compliment!! Tee hee!! Won't keep you waiting long but as for whether it's Dru or not...? Time will tell!! :) *hugs back*

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 12:26 pm Title: Gone!

Good lord woman! I'm gone for a little while and this is what happens!! They have to find Spike!
Great stuff!

Author's Response: You should know me by now puska - turn your back for a second and all hell could break out!! Tee hee! :)

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:59 am Title: Gone!

Great chapter - I love it!

Author's Response: Hi michelle D - glad you loved it!! More soon! :)

Reviewer: Avalon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 11:35 am Title: Gone!

Oooooh, who took Spike???

Can't wait to see who it was and what the "Normals" find out ;)

Author's Response: Hi Avalon! You'll have to wait to find out!! tee hee!! :) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 08:16 am Title: Out To Dinner

Evil cliffhanger, evil author!! It was all going too well wasn't it? Love it.

Author's Response: Hi Sam!! You really know me now!!! lol Glad you loved it :) I love cliffhangers!! tee hee!!!

Reviewer: Kandrin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2008 - 04:04 am Title: Out To Dinner

Oh.... you *evil woman*! I hope Spike is okay.
Liked the bickering between Spike and Angel - that seemed more like the two of them! :)
Looking forward to your next update!

Author's Response: hi Kandrin, thakns for reviewing!! I'm taking the whole *evil woman* thing as a compliment!!! LOL!!! I love writing bickering Angel and Spike! As even tho 'my' Angel is nicer to Spike there is no way that they'd not bicker!!! lol!!

Reviewer: Terapsina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 11:14 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Yay, problems. I know I shouldn't be too happy about that, but really - it is time to see Buffy in action. That is why we love this show so much anyway. Well that and Spike "dancing".
Who the heck kidnapped him? I know you wont tell, but just promise us you wont make him a vampire again.
And just so you know I like when people are dragged in this stuff, be a nice writer and let atleast one of those new friends find out. It doesn't have to be right now, but it just isn't a real AU without a new guy seeing some demon for the first time.
Finally, I am thrilled for your updates, you are the first writer I had the pleasure to find that gives updates so regularly.
I could go on... but that would probably drag you away from the stuff you are doing right now - to get to the chapter we (I'm sure I'm not alone in this) are waiting for so impatiently.

Author's Response: Hi Terapsina! Thanks for such a great review! Glad you're happy about the regular updates even tho they've not quite hit the daily target of late with work being a bit busy. :) Can't tell you much apart from I like the way you're thinking.....!!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Out To Dinner

OMG!!! That stupid dark figure's got Spike!!!

Aaaaaaand we're back to the batting of eyelashes!!! They have to find him soon and get him back! And he could be hurt again!

Fix this Mabel *bats eyelashes more rapidly than ever before*
*hugs*

Author's Response: Hi Sotia! I thought that this might be hazardous to eyelashes!!!! Tee hee!! Will update soon I promise!! *hugs back* in desperate hope the eyelashes will survive!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

And again: Ch. 27
Awe, Spike tried very hard :)) I think he was simply to stubborn to give up now that he has come so far. *g* And Moira will like that Angel is invited too (as the others will going out instead of Buffy cooking).
Oh my and then I wanted to write how wonderful the dinner went. *sigh*
It was the man that followed them, right? I hope you can update soon after leaving us with such a cliffhanger.

Author's Response: Won't keep you waiting too long Cordyk!!! At leastthey had an enjoyable dinner!! Tee hee!!! More soon and thanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Why do I have the feeling that whoever has him( I think Dru) is going to vampasize him again. Hope they find him before that happens.

Author's Response: Hi Jo!! You'll just have to read the next couple of chapters to find out! :) Thanks for reviewing!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 07:35 pm Title: Out To Dinner

You evil, evil witch!!! That is the only thing I have to say right now 'coz I simply have no other words. You evil, evil witch, you! You know what you have to do! *pointing her finger at your computer*

Author's Response: I'm cackling evilly as i write this!!! Got to sit up tonight again with foaling mare and no access to computers there!!! Will update tomorrow eve UK time!! *grins*

Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 06:56 pm Title: Out To Dinner

Oh, no!

I loved this very in character line of Angels: “My tie’s not boring,” muttered Angel, looking at it.

Author's Response: I got a good visual of Angel holding the end of his tie up as he muttered as i wrote it!! Tee hee!! More soon! *hugs*

Reviewer: Dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2008 - 06:46 pm Title: Baby Steps

Loved the end of this chapter with Spike going on about his past and Buffy falling asleep. Nice domestic moment.

I'm thinking I know who's lurking in the shadows.

Author's Response: I just thought he has so may memories of his past to tell her! Glad you liked it! If you are right - i'll give you a cookie!! lol! :)

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