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Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 09:25 pm Title: Making A Splash

Loved that, the way his dad died was interesting and I liked the aquaphobia.

Author's Response: Glad that you loved it! Thought it would be good to show why his dad wasn't around when he was turned! :) thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 11:56 am Title: I Can...I Can...

hee, whats brad up to?, im intrigued. Great stuff


Author's Response: Won't keep you waiting long to find out! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2008 - 04:34 am Title: I Can...I Can...

ho nice! its good to see spike getting back to his cocky self! :)

Author's Response: glad you liked it:) Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 10:45 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Loved how cute they were, more please.

Author's Response: your wish is my command!! more later today! :) Thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 08:43 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Awe :) Good to see Spike so happy again, having more hope now. And being able to move his feet :)
Now I wonder what Brad has planned to help Spike. Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Im mending him slowly but surely!! lol! thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:26 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Hahaha, so typical Spike! The first thing he does when he can move his legs is to shag Buffy senseless :-)

I hope Brad has some cool ideas which will make our vampire guy hot ;-)

Keep on the good work hun!

Author's Response: cheers Maddonna! Yes...Spike ...got to love him!! lol!

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 03:12 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Aw, leave us hanging why don't you : ) Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: what can i say? I just can't resist it when opportunities like that pop up! lol! Thanks Dawn :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 02:57 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

I just know something bad is going to happen. Everything is going too well for our happy couple. I wonder what Brad has up his sleeve.... :)


Author's Response: God I really have you all not trusting me don't I? lol!! just how I like it tee hee - will try not to keep you waiting too long! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2008 - 01:59 pm Title: I Can...I Can...

Yayyyyyy! I love that things are constantly improving! Still waiting for the other shoe to drop though :( Please don't make them go through any more pain, his efforts to get better are straining enough!

Can't wait to see what Brad told Buffy!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Now would I be that mean? Don't answer that! lol! *big hugs*

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 08:21 am Title: It's Good To Talk...

nice.. its really going to be hard to talk to moria! all the lies! love it ! keep it up!

Author's Response: Cheers Spuffy! Thakns for letting me know! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 05:55 am Title: It's Good To Talk...

Fab interpretation of Spike's Shanshu although very evil to turn it into a cliffie!!! Loved the update and thanks.

Author's Response: Hi Sam! Glad you loved it! I just couldn't resist the cliffie!! LOL :)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 01:13 am Title: It's Good To Talk...

sweet look foward to more

Author's Response: Thanks - will try not to keep you too long! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 12:37 am Title: It's Good To Talk...

And Spike gets his cloud with the silver lining. I'm glad he's going to walk again , eventually . I must say as much as I dislike Angel , i'm glad he's being stand up guy in this fic and not an asshole, or should I say arsehole, lol. another great chapter Mabel, keep im coming, come on , give me more, teehee.

Author's Response: I did this challenge to make me write Angel as he's not my fave character and after having him as horrid sod in CL thought i'd try to make him nicer in this fic! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 08:42 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

Oh my, the irony... therefore Spike hadn't noticed that he was still strong. I wondered who he could have missed that.
Feared the session would go wrong with Spike no able to tell everything but it went good. Spike had to talk about it with someone that learned to do it (to listen and to help).

Author's Response: Yes the irony of it hit home - he did know he was bit stronger than'William' had been but wasn't enough to make him feel better about it happening! :) I enjoyed writing the Moira/spike scenes. :)

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:41 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

This is such a nice story because it´s different from the other stories. Please update soon:-))

Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that it's different - I love it when people say that about my stories! I thin Changing Lives held a few surprises that readers didn't expect! Will update asap but this week is a bit tricky workwise but will try my best! :) Thanks for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:39 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

::::::::staggering:::::::: Spike having second thoughts before acting? Admitting he's wrong? Talking to a psychiatrist? Being friends with Peaches??? LOL Seriously - great story progression with Angel sharing the info, Spike realizing what he had done/wasted and his resulting guilt from it.
See you in the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: What can I say? lol I love making them act how I want them to - Angel should be nicer to poor old Spike! lol!! thanks for the review! See you soon!:)

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 02:45 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

Nice chapter, glad that the prophecy still promises Spike some hope.

Author's Response: Glad you liked! About time the poor devil had some hope ! :) lol

Reviewer: dawnofme Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 02:24 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

Extra strength human Spike. Great twist. Liking it. : )

Author's Response: did that bit for my beta Carol - I keep writing human Spike so least I could do is make him extra strong!! lol!! :)

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 01:36 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

Yayyyyyyyy!!! Spike will be as good as new! Thank you Mabel!!!

*hugs you tight*

Author's Response: I always break him but I always mend him in the end!! LOL *big hugs to you* take care of yourself :)

Reviewer: puska Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:55 pm Title: It's Good To Talk...

*sigh* Its nice to see Spike's mental state is improving. I can so picture Spike's thought when he's talking to Moira, his voice was perfect. :) Love it.

Author's Response: I can so picture Spike's thought when he's talking to Moira, his voice was perfect. :) Love it. ---That is just so nice to hear - thank you - i'm now grinning like an idiot! :)

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 04:01 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

Loved it! You had me rolling! ^_^ I loved the joking between Spike, Angel and Buffy.


Author's Response: Hi Bryntrev - glad the laughing was infectious for you too!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:23 am Title: You'll Never Be Normal...

“I will do, Brad,” said Buffy with a smile, “Perhaps there can be oil involved?”

“Bloody hell, woman,” muttered Spike, making both Buffy and Brad laugh.

LOL!! Loved it.

The the cliffhanger! I'd better wake up and find an update to this story, woman! Yes, that's an order.

I want to know what comes after the ... and I want to know NOW! : )

Author's Response: the oil involved line is ripped from episode in S7 where A and S are jealous of each other!! lol - thought it fit quite well!!

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:11 am Title: Dreaming eh?

Um...That was hot! LOL! Good job. Great chapter.

Author's Response: ooh thank you - still not in my confort zone but was easier to write than i thought it'd be! :)

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 03:04 am Title: Turning Point

I loved this line : ) Great chapter.

“No, you really don’t if you keep on saying stuff like that. We deserve each other, we’re a team, two halves of one whole and all that baloney.”

Author's Response: gotta put a bit of corny stuff in there!! lol

Reviewer: DawnofMe Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 12:33 am Title: No!

A very serious chapter about a very serious subject, but I couldn't help but laugh at this line:

Spike closed his eyes and groaned. “Why couldn’t someone just die when they wanted to?”

Author's Response: glad you picked that line up - i couldn't resist putting it in! Poor guy just has nothing going his way!! LOL

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