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Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2008 - 10:52 pm Title: chapter 1: the beginning

Please separate your paragraphs more. You need to create a new paragraph when a new person speaks.

Author's Response: thanks I am working on it

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