Dru can't decide if Spike is her dark or her white knight, huh? But Miss Edith told he already that Spike is not hers to keep.
Interesting, Angel was worried about Dru? Till next part.

Author's Response: i hope to have that up sometime this week

I really like this story, especially Angel and Buffy's reaction to him. "No woman could resist his dark, brooding good looks." HAH! I can't wait to learn more about how you've created demon history or society or family bonds, especially when I get a feeling there's going to be some claiming going on. I love that Buffy in this story can see shades of grey and that it isn't so cut and dried. I think it would be nice to see some more actions in scenes to show how feelings or thoughts come to be instead of just a list of thoughts about someone or whatever is going on without really being shown. Good job with the Dru-speak and I hope to read more soon!

Author's Response: oh you might be right on the claiming. thanks for the good notes and my beta is great with helping with dru speak which is not always easy i have to keep watching her to get it right