Reviews For SunnyHell
Reviewer: B Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: chapter 6
Date: 04/25/2008 - 09:17 pm Title: chapter 6
Loving the concept of this story and looking forward to reading more.
A word of advice, the flow of the story seems rushed a bit more meat on the bones is needed.
B
Reviewer: cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2008 - 08:10 pm Title: chapter 6
Date: 04/25/2008 - 08:10 pm Title: chapter 6
Your Angel here isn't very understandable. He doesn't listen when Buffy is talking, he hears only what he wants to hear. ;-)
Good that Buffy knows what she wants. :)