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Reviewer: NicNac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 06:38 am Title: 3

Awww, Gunn the bully made me sad. But then he was the "nice bully" which made me happy again. Which is weird really, since I honestly don't care about Gunn's character that much.

Anyways enjoying the story so far!

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2009 - 06:38 pm Title: 3

wow that was really intense. i can see what you mean about being afraid for this chapter. not sure where this is going but that was def rough but i can see it's necessity to ur story. good chapter.

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 03:47 pm Title: 3

Wow. Liam is a mother fucker in this fic. I can't believe he was going to do that. I think he would have went through with it if Gunn hadn't stopped him because he is an asshole.

Poor William having to deal with those three goons. I hope he does get his revenge on them.

*flicks them*

Reviewer: BloodStainedSnow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2008 - 03:54 am Title: 3

Quite the intense chapter. You captured the fear well and created one bastard of a bully. Things just keep getting worse and worse for William. I hope he catches a break soon.

I'm glad Gunn sorta opposed the incident. Even though this is an alternate universe story, it's hard for me to see Gunn as a bully.


Author's Response: I know what you mean, I always liked Gunn. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 11:09 pm Title: 3

He was so gonna do it...looks like Liam is the closet gay-boy! Good for Gunn sticking to his principles, I always liked him. Maybe he'll be a good guy? Anyways, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I've always liked Gunn too. Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: The Booknerd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:06 pm Title: 3

Woah! That was intense.

Author's Response: Good, that was what I was going for. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SpikesGoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 12:17 pm Title: 3

God how i hate Angel! Loved that chapter, can't wait for the next one now!

Author's Response: Thank you, next chapter will be up soon. :)

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2008 - 07:47 am Title: 3

Oh - will we get to see an emerging Spike so Liam can get his face smashed in. What a creep! and such a total sadist!
Loved Gunn in this chapter - going from the totally unsympathetic bully to the slightly redeemed saviour.
Looking forward to more : )


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you liked it. I always liked Gunn so he won't be a total bad guy here.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: 3

Yikes! That was one scary scene, I'm glad William came out of it only shaken and not seriously harmed. Good update.

Author's Response: Yeah, he was lucky. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 08:42 pm Title: 3

*phew* I really thought for a moment that Liam was gonna rape William. Liam is a bastard, threatening William this way.

Author's Response: He sure is, hopefully he'll get what he deserves eventually. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 06:29 pm Title: 3

Wow. Liam is about as evil here as I've ever seen him. I'm almost crying-I really want to give poor William a snuggle. Please make Buffy do that soon.

Author's Response: Maybe... *evil grin* Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 05:22 pm Title: 3

OMFG LIAM IS A SICK BASTARD AND I HOPE THAT HE NEVER HURTS WILLIAM AND THAT WILLIAM GETS HIS REVENGE!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe wat liam almost did and im SOOOO glad that gunn stopped him. i REALLY hope that he gets up the courage to talk to buffy soon and that they get together. also i hope that liam doesnt hurt william and that he leaves him alone. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Vanilla Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 05:05 pm Title: 3

Oh, wow. Poor, poor William, I can't believe the horrors he has to endure at the hands of those assholes. Glad he wants revenge, and glad it seems like Gunn might not be quite as bad as the other two. Great chapter, so much tension!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it, thanks! :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 03:53 pm Title: 3

God I thought he was actually going to rape him for a moment, well done chapter.

Author's Response: He probably would have, good thing Gunn was there. :) Thank you!

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