[Report This]Date: 06/14/2008 - 12:32 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
After treating myself to a day reading Spuffy, I lost track of what fics I was reading and what were WIPS and what were complete... I love this story, I do.... But I thought it was complete and when I got to the end of this chapter I literally shouted out loud NOOOO!!!!! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, I hate when that happens! Well I promise this fic will get updated soon! So happy you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2008 - 12:00 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
loved the end part of that chapter:).... can't wait to read more, hope the next chapter is up soon
Author's Response: Thank you, pixiecorn! More as soon as I can, glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 06/09/2008 - 06:20 am Title: "Can I stay?"
I just caught up with your beautiful story in one sitting and can I just say...wow. Reaching the end of this chapter was just about the saddest thing ever. Mooooooore!! Please : D The way you've written Spike and Buffy is just so honest and believable, and it's often really hard to truly find that in a fic. The whole night you've written for our pair--I can totally imagine all of it. I think we've all had those wonderful, partying, cheer-up nights with good friends and the nostalgia alone gave me warm fuzzies. Having Spike for such an evening would definitely be a plus. : ) Oh and the next time I host a party, I'm totally using your recipe for the "Buffy"!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review, AnniePants. It's so wonderful to hear that it seems so authentic to you, and yay for nostalgia! The "Buffy" is a drink my friend makes that he calls "Yellow Cake". Mmm scrumptious! So glad you're reading, can't wait to hear what you think of the coming chapters!
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2008 - 09:15 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
WOW, i just got caught up on my reading and can I say what brilliant chapters they are darling. I like that Spike didn't want to be her first for obvious reasons, but oh boy is Buffy ever insistent. Hmmm, methinks the gentleman doth protest too much - but it won't last. Looking very forward to the next chapter boo. Ready for some hot luvin and hopefully Spike won't leave or at least take Buffy with him. Bravo sweety.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, IBE! Glad you got the chance to catch up, and enjoyed the last few chapters.
[Report This]Date: 06/08/2008 - 03:54 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
So close....and then she drops the bomb.
I love the roller coaster ride of emotions this night has been for both of them.
When this night is over, I'm betting Spike has to re-think his travel plans.
Author's Response: Oh yes, I'm thinking the travel plans are in jeopardy. The roller coaster will keep on going for quite a few more hours. Hang on for the ride!
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2008 - 06:49 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
Oh I loved it, I hope he really does not push her away.
Author's Response: Thanks, smlcspike! Glad you loved it!
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2008 - 08:42 am Title: "Can I stay?"
great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one
Author's Response: Thanks, Lacey Marsters! I'm happy you're reading.
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2008 - 01:53 am Title: "Can I stay?"
dum da dum dum!
Author's Response: Hehe! All dramatic, isn't it?
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 10:24 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
(We had a thunderstorm coming last chapter so I had to hurry.)
Nice twist with Buffy being a virgin; Spike was a real gentleman. So he is already falling...
Difficult for Buffy when Spike will leave; maybe she should go with him ;-)
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: Maybe she should! Of course, that's not an easy decision at all. Glad you liked, cordykitten, thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
i love how spike is the vulnerable one here, even though he's the one with all the experience, and she's the one with such a traumatic day. i really like how they're interacting - trying to not fall too hard, but failing miserably. :D
A great chapter! thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's quite a turnaround of roles once their hearts are involved. So glad you liked it, quirks, hopefully I can get you another quick update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 03:02 pm Title: "Can I stay?"
You stop THERE? That's just wicked! ;)
More SOON, please! I'll beg if I have to. :D
Author's Response: I am a wicked little thing, it's part of my charm. :) I do enjoy the begging, but it's not necessary, more will be coming your way as soon as possible! Thanks for reviewing, Tanit! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 11:44 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Ooh, she's a virgin! I thought that might be what she wanted to tell him last chapter. (And did I miss why Spike *has* to take off tomorrow? I mean, he's got nowhere to go, right?) Another great chapter!
Author's Response: The why is sort of a personal, self-preservationist decision, not necessarily a concrete "have to leave". But HE thinks he does. Silly boy. So glad you liked, GoldenUsagi!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 10:18 am Title: "Can I stay?"
I've been very naughty and haven't reviewed for a few chappies but I hope you realise this story is pure gold. I love every single bit of it. Eagerly awaiting more!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I'm so happy you're enjoying it, naughty reviewer that you are. :) More as soon as I can, I appreciate the review!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 09:54 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Oh the poor babies-So much pain and the promise of even more.
This can be worked out folks-neither of you has anything that ties to anyone or anyplace else.
More soon please-I love this fic.
Author's Response: They're definitely a sad pair, aren't they? And you're right...both of their ties to their lives aren't very strong. So glad you liked it, Dorians Kitten!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 08:55 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Enjoying... Buffy the virgin.. and calling him William.. very personal.. Waiting.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Pam S. More soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 07:19 am Title: "Can I stay?"
“You’re a…fuck.”
“I’m a fuck?”
“No, you’re…fuck.”
*giggles uncontrollably* This part had me cracking up like crazy! It's just so cute. :D Ah, now I know why Spike is leaving. That accident is... wow. It really showed how deep in the pit he was in, so far in he couldn't climb out. Poor Spike...
Excellent chappie! More, please...
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad that part made you laugh, I found it pretty entertaining. Spike was definitely deep in a whole, and he sees only one way out. Maybe not the right way, though. More ASAP, thanks for the review, luxferi!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 06:41 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Yes! Please continue! This is getting so good!
Author's Response: Thanks, Elizabeth! Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 06:06 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Oh you are mean and evil and I adored every word!!! Way to go Buffy. She's changed so much in a few short hours and knows what she wants (and who can blame her!!) as if Spike makes her the person she should be. Loved it but please update - PLEASE.
Author's Response: Mean and evil, that's me! Buffy's definitely slowing maturing, she owes a lot to Spike, wouldn't you say? :) Thanks for reviewing, Sam, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 05:45 am Title: "Can I stay?"
AWW HOW SWEET, WHY CANT THEY STAY TOGETHER, THEY BOTH NO THEY WANT TO BE WITH EACH OTHER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that hes so helpless when hes with her and that he wants her to be his. also i cant believe that he almost hurt faith, im glad hes off the drugs. i really hope that they stay together and that she goes with him. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX
Author's Response: Thanks, sarah g! So glad you're liking the story so much, more as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 05:09 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Love it, I can't wait to see if he stays or she leaves with him...or at least thats what I hope will happen.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nicka! Glad you like it, and I hope the ending won't disappoint!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 05:00 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Yay! Need more, NOW!!! :) Don't let me down... k? :)
Author's Response: Oh, I'll try my hardest not to, Devin! More ASAP, thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 04:37 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Aargh! You can't leave it there, you can't! I need to know what he says, like now. Please, please, please update asap! Love this story. :)
Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm a little devil. I'm so happy you love the story, Pet, thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 03:53 am Title: "Can I stay?"
Ahhhh, what an evil place to end the chapter, lol. Thanks for yet another wonderful update. Hopefully Buffy got through to him (I'm sure she did, at least I think she did, lol). Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Mark! I think Spike's a goner---Buffy can be extraordinarily convincing. More soon, glad you're still reading!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 03:21 am Title: "Can I stay?"
I've just caught up with two wonderful chapters. You have a real talent for building up tension, bringing it down, then building it even higher. Gah! I hope you'll up-date soon!
I think they should find some way to tap into her parents funds and take off to Europe!
Author's Response: Thank you, IT! If only they could steal the Summers fortune, they certainly deserve it more! So glad you're reading, I appreciate the review!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2008 - 02:50 am Title: "Can I stay?"
don't know if i commented on this story before (think i have, but not quite sure), but let me say it one more time: i love this story, especially this chapter. i liked how you got deeper into spike and buffy's character and the twist at the end -- definitely peaked my interest. now if only you hadn't left it at such an evil spot...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, relishthebreath! So glad you're reading. I definitely stopped in an evil spot, but hopefully next chapter will make up for it!
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