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Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Nine

*Buffy stood with Cordelia and Faith, the newest member of their squad, as their couch/COACH finished giving them a pep talk for the next game.* Sorry for pointing out it like that but I can't help it. I laughed quite hard picturing a couch giving pep talk. :) But it's not a laugh at your expense, I understand perfectly well how these kind of typos weasel themselves into the text. It's just so funny :) Great story btw. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 05:17 am Title: Nine

“But the contrast…the marshmallows help show the true depth of the chocolate. Sometimes things are more themselves in the presence of that which is other.” -- Talking about hot chocolate, but really, it's totally the two of them, but as the author you totally know that. Love how that's slipped in. And I love Cordy's, “That would be Buffy’s other boyfriend.” -- line. He totally is, hearts desire and all that. Wonder when she'll notice. Gotta wonder what kind of damage Faith will do, too. Truly looking forward to more. Really enjoying it so far.


Author's Response: This is my favorite review ever!!! I laughed out loud when I read "but as the author you totally know that". I wish I could pretend that the line hadn't been intentional. Thank you so much for all of your reviews-updates will be frequent.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 03:35 am Title: Nine

AHHH SHE WAS TOTALLY JEALOUS!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that joyce wants them to get together and its so sad wat happened to anne. will is like the perfect man, if only every guy in the real world was that considerate. ne ways i really hope that faith makes buffy see wat shes missing and makes buffy finally get with him. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX!

Author's Response: Oh no-don't die. I'll update today!!!! :D

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 02:09 am Title: Nine

i'm glad to see faith there to give buffy a kick in the pants!
the bit about anne's illness was sad, but a great explanation for william's current behavior. nice job!
thanks for the update


Author's Response: Thank You! :)

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2008 - 01:38 am Title: Nine

Loved them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 9 execellent chapters. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Wow-thanks. Love you username by the way.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 11:28 pm Title: Nine

Oh I would love to see how she reacted if he started going out with someone else. More please soon.

Author's Response: Thank You for your review! Jealous Buffy could be fun!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 08:47 pm Title: Nine

So even Joyce thinks that Buffy is totally clueless about dating William; we'll see about that 'not hurting' will go.
I'm glad to see that Anne is better now after fighting the cancer. I didn't think that it was that bad. No wonder William is protective.
Enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 05:45 pm Title: Nine

They're just so cute together! *lol* I know I said that before, feels like I'm repeating myself. But they are! :) Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks Bunches Sweetie!

Reviewer: maddonna001 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 03:35 pm Title: Nine

OMG, I hope Faith won`t throw herself on William and Buffy finally stops the whole denial thing... Please, update again!

Author's Response: Hmm...what would a Faith/William scene look like? I'll be updating today. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2008 - 02:38 pm Title: Nine

Their relationship seems to be moving at a glacial speed. When will Buffy realize what a great guy William is and finally get with the program? I am losing my mind out frustration with Buffy. lol

Author's Response: ooh-I'm sorry that it is driving you crazy. I just wanted to give them some time to develop a deep relationship. So many fics (indeed many of my favs) have them hitting the sheets without even exchanging full names, I thought that I'd try something different. I promise that the snuggles and naughty-stuff is coming. :D

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