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Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 06:05 am Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter. The attention to detail was great and it was easy to just let myself get lost in the story with the vivid picture your words painted.

Uh-oh! The spell has taken hold! I wonder what will happen when everybody wakes up! Great installment and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: thanks. i took your advice and tried to put more detail into it. i'm happy you liked it. and there will be another update soon.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 04:53 am Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

Ohhhhh, it's a good thing they were mated before the spell took hold I think. I like your Anya a lot, but the rest of the Scoobies deserve a thorough spanking, and not of the pleasurable kind.

Can I slap them around? Can I? No? Well then, can Buffy at some point? Pretty please??? *bats eyelashes*

Really loving this, please update soon!

*huggles*

Author's Response: Thanks hon. Glad you like Anya, but please don't judge Xan to harshly. and yes you and buffy can slap her around. and another one's comming soon so don't worry.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2008 - 01:02 am Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

curious to see what is next

Author's Response: Thanks. there should be more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 09:44 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

Grrr the spell was done; I hope the claim what happened just before will interfere with it. It's so unfair that that happened to them. *glares at Willow*
~ Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Unfair but nessary. Thanks for reading i'm glad you like it. more will come soon.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 08:38 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

aahhh how could you Willow??? Anya is just trying to fit in and Xander is just an idiot but Willow is twisting everything a witch should believe in!! wonderfully writtena and I hope you realsie I'm ranting because its so well written. looking forward to next chapter

Author's Response: Well thank you hon. Willow is a twisted one in this. and don't be to hard on Anya and Xan. there might be more to there part than meets the eye.....

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 07:24 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

I hope something really bad happens to Willow and Co.! She really needs bringing down a peg or two - make that ten.

Author's Response: Willow i agree with, but not so much and Co..... wait and find out. thanks for leaving a comment though. it means alot to me. glad you like it

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 06:20 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

Oh no, this is bad. The spell, I mean, the Spuffy part was really great. :) So, they claimed each other? I think that's a good thing, hopefully their bond will be stronger than the stupid spell. (of course that would be too good to be true, I can see the angst coming up) Really don't like Willow here. Love the story though. :)

Author's Response: lol. well i'm glad the spuffy part was great. and we will see what happens with the claim. thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 06:00 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

Naughty, meddling Willow, can't wait till she gets her due! Great Buffy & Spike, very steamy! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: More comming soon dear. and don't worry i'll make sure she gets her due's.

Reviewer: maddonna001 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2008 - 05:48 pm Title: Date's done and Spell's begun

More, more, more! you know how much I hate cliffhangers! ;-)

Author's Response: lol... this cliffie was needed. couldn't put everything in one chapter. more will be comming shortly.

Reviewer: Bryntrev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2008 - 09:21 pm Title: Evening Plans

Awwww! This has to be one of the sweetest dates I've ever read! *sniff sniff* Love the story so far - looking forward to the next chapter. I like the friendship between Joyce and Spike.

Author's Response: Thank you. i always thought that him and Joyce had a friendship going. i'm sure if she were alive longer she would have done this for spike.

Reviewer: fyreburned:f Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2008 - 01:37 am Title: Evening Plans

Awwww! This is SO Very Sweet! Spike and his "Inner William" at his best! Bravo!
And all the things she loves and desires! Just for her! She is right---she hasn't been allowed to be that young lady since she's been called, and at the very latest since Angel...it was always what someone else wanted FOR her, Required OF her, or Wanted FROM her. Never something just FOR her, just BECAUSE, or rarely even just in thanks TO her.
A lovely depiction of a relaxed Buffy----one actually relaxed enough to be able to EAT!!! LOL!!!!
I look forward to more of this when you update!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburnedf~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Glad you liked it hon. i enjoyed writting it too. there will be another update soon.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 05:57 pm Title: Evening Plans

Very sweet, glad they had such a lovely time. looking forward to more soon.

Author's Response: aahhh thank you. glad you liked it. i'll have more very soon.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 05:49 pm Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

Moving right along, I hope they get their nice evening before Willow can muck it up.

Author's Response: thank you. well see on the nice evening. please hope away.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 05:47 pm Title: Evening Plans

Such a nice gift, the evening out for Buffy. It was the right gift for her. Now I hope the dating will go well till their friends get to know of it (and possibly interfere).

Author's Response: i thought it was nice too. and we shall have to see how it goes. thanks for the reviews. they make me happy.

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 05:45 pm Title: Plotting all around

Great start, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thank you. i'll be posting chapters as soon as i can.

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 12:49 pm Title: Evening Plans

awww so so so cute!!!
i love it . it was like one of the cutest dates ever!!!

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it. i like to think if buffy had givin him the chance on the show this is how he would have done it.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 08:46 am Title: Evening Plans

That was so sweet! Looking forward to read more of this story. :)

Author's Response: thanks, i will try to have more as soon as i can. thanks for leaving a comment, it means alot to me

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 08:41 am Title: Evening Plans

I'm glad that went so well - but how long will it last once Willow interferes?

Author's Response: i'm not telling. but i will say you'll find out soon. so thanks for the comment. hope you keep enjoying it.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 07:45 am Title: Evening Plans

YAY for the kick-ass date! I'm so happy that Buffy decided to give this thing between them a chance, and yet it makes me so much more afraid for how Willow is hellbent to screw this up for them!

Grrrrr, I want more, please, and promise to keep bugging Shadow for updates if ou update this soon!

*hugs*

Author's Response: yeah Willow is a poopy head here. sorry to all Willow fans. and i will get more up as soon as i get them from kristi so don't growl at me. :) glad you like it and of course i'm gonna bug shadow for updates. *hugs back* thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2008 - 07:17 am Title: Evening Plans

wonderful, loved the gentle thoughtful Spike, and he brings out the best in Buffy as well. dreading what willow is going to pull.
more please

Author's Response: more is comming i promise. and it will be bad, but trust in me i can't do big long angst. thanks for the thoughts and i promise more soon

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2008 - 12:44 am Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

great start

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 06:36 pm Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

It's a great story with alot of potential. I really like where you are going with it and can't wait to read more.

Though, if I may make a suggestion, a little more detail would not only do wonders for helping paint a more vivid picture for the readers but it would also lengthen the chapters.

For example:

"Buffy awoke to the sound of the phone ringing, she reached to the counter between her and Willow’s bed. “Hello,” she mumbled sleepily into the phone. "

Why was Buffy asleep in the middle of the day? Was she out slaying late? Did she have an early morning class? Was she just not feeling well? And where was she? I'm assuming the dorms, but it doesn't say either way.

Okay, can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Well first of all thank you. I will keep what you said in mind. I have a hard time doing the really discriptive things. But i really appereciate the advice and will try to work on it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 06:11 pm Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

Good to know I'm not imagine things (having seen this before) :)
Oh Xander, you too? I can't remember if Anya did help too or if she used her common sense.
I hope Buffy will love her surprise :))

Author's Response: nope not imagining things. and yep Xander too. you'll have to wait and see with Anya. thanks again for the review and glad you are still enjoying it.

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 11:47 am Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

Can I punch Willow on the nose?

Xander always was too slow to catch up, and I hate that he's going to help Willow *pouts* I hope Anya resists their plan!

*keeps fingers crossed for Spuffy*

I really like this hun, please update soon!!!

*hugs*

Author's Response: Yes you can punch Willow, and your right Xander is always slow. As far as Anya's concerned..... you'll just have to wait and see. And i'll update as soon as i can. Glad you're enjoying it. thanks for the review

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2008 - 08:53 am Title: Friends Bad, Mothers Good

wonderful chapter, hope that the spell really backfires on Willow especially as even Xander can see its wrong.
more please

Author's Response: We'll have to see. and you're right if Xander has doubts about it, it can't be good. Thanks for the review and i'll get more up as soon as i can.

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