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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 02:36 pm Title: Harmony.

After Spike's realization how much in love he is with Buffy this was quite a turn of events. Last chapter a love declaration everybody heart and now this? Buffy is too hurt to see that things don't fit here.
Poor Buffy... Spike didn't say much.

Author's Response: Spike is really taken by surprise so no he doesn't say a lot, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 06:37 am Title: Harmony.

i found this chapter a bit out of place after the last one, you have spike thinking he's in love with her and singing that song to her, then you have her catch harmony all over him, it just seemed out of nowhere for me. harmony's a slut basically, so i do believe that she just jumped him, but at this rate, i find it hard for buffy to ever really trust him and i can't say that i blame her, she doesn't seem to be getting much of a break.

Author's Response: I know it seems a bit strange but you are right Harmony is a slut so..... i want this to be a bit of a struggle for Buffy the try and trust another man but fear not all will be explained in the next chapter.

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