Still enjoying it! Though, honestly, there were a few easily fixable mistakes. Mainly missing commas and a couple misplaced words. It seems like you have quite a bit of talent, just remember it's always better to wait a bit longer before you post a new chapter to make sure you've edited everything, rather than immediately posting what you may have spent all night just writing. Not trying to be mean or anything, but by making sure you put out your best work (even if it means waiting a day or two to update) you are gauranteed more readers and reviews.

Hope to see more soon! :)

Author's Response: Yeah i definately understand... I really need a Beta...thinks for the comment!

I LOVE THIS STORY AND AM SO HAPPY THAT U UPDATED!! i cant believe how quick buffy is to judge spike, she knows he has a past and she should understand that other women are included in that past. i really hope that they talk things through and that wen she finds out his past she doesnt freak. also i hope that faith doesnt hurt buffy or spike and that everything works out well. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: THanks...she is quick to judge but soon you will see if it works out! Thanks for the comment!