Ok loved the chapter. Love the story just one thing about it got to me. I dunno if it was deliberate mistake or not. But the geograph thing. Scotland isn't in England. I'm from Scotland, and sometimes people just confuse it, but scotland is not in England. It's just anothe country that makes up a group that makes the United Kingdom. Maybe you knew that i don't know, as i say maybe it was a deliberate thing. But i just had to point it out. But i do love the story, i think it's fab and ure a fab writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. Jo

Author's Response: I noticed that too but the entire Tod section is directly from the screenplay of A Life Less Ordinary (I added a few lines...) and I think it was the character proving that she could tell Tod just about anything and he'd buy it. But as a whole it was deliberate. ;)