Date: 11/05/2008 - 01:05 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
I love this story so far any chance or an update soon?
Date: 05/14/2008 - 05:16 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
interesting story, quite different from the historical Au's I've read before..
I think English not being your first language, make this story all the more realistic, as you not slipping into modern slang, which can be so annoying to read is some "so called" historical fiction..
your plot has a great deal of possibilities, you write well, looking forward to more
Date: 05/14/2008 - 05:15 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
interesting story, quite different from the historical Au's I've read before..
I think English not being your first language, make this story all the more realistic, as you not slipping into modern slang, which can be so annoying to read is some "so called" historical fiction..
your plot has a great deal of possibilities, you write well, looking forward to more
Date: 05/14/2008 - 05:13 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
interesting story, quite different from the historical Au's I've read before..
I think English not being your first language, make this story all the more realistic, as you not slipping into modern slang, which can be so annoying to read is some "so called" historical fiction..
your plot has a great deal of possibilities, you write well, looking forward to more
Date: 05/13/2008 - 03:08 am Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
Liking the story so far. Can't wait for the rest to unfold...please don't torture me... Keep writing...
Date: 05/13/2008 - 01:57 am Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
Yet another btilliant chaoter sweety, I;m loving the way you;re bringin out the aspects of history and the resons for ouot charcters feelings - its done very well., Can;t wait for the nexy update hon - bravo on a great chapter.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 10:46 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
really good story, like the hundred year war details, look foward to more
Date: 05/12/2008 - 10:05 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
This story looks really promising, I can't wait to read more.
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:29 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
LOVED IT, IM GLAD THAT U UPDATED AND I HOPE THAT SHE DOESNT KILL WILLIAM AND THAT THEY GET TOGETHER!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, IM DYING TO READ MORE!! THANX!!
Date: 05/12/2008 - 02:07 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
Good to see an update (and to hear we'll get another chapter).
Interesting, so William has problems with the sun? Almost like a vampire (because they can tolerate fire / the heat of fire).
And the marriage is already announced; doesn't sound as if there's a way out for Lady Elizabeth.
I wonder if Father Caleb will help her, in doubt he won't I guess.
Looking forward to more :)
Date: 05/12/2008 - 03:37 am Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
This story is wonderful! I would have never guessed English was not your first language, you write beautifully!
Date: 05/12/2008 - 02:41 am Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
I was so excited to find your update! I love this story it's so unique and different and I cannot wait to see what comes next!
Date: 05/11/2008 - 09:06 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
I'm enjoying your story. I love the historical tidbits of info that you give us.
Date: 05/11/2008 - 08:10 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
Loving the setup of your story.... a little history and a little BtVS...
Enjoying...
Date: 05/11/2008 - 07:58 pm Title: Greyhounds in the Slips
would it be flemish? or andorian?
loved the update. you have the problems of the healers perfectly, and I hate Caleb, but you want me to don't you?
mopre please
Author's Response: You know, I am so glad you liked it, because 1) your writing is amazing!!! 2) I don't have time to do much research so I am blurring the lines a little between the 1350's and early 1400's *lol*. As for Caleb, I have a lot in store for him!