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Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2008 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

I loved this chap.The line where Buffy thought that she should have read more Austin because all she could come up with was 'Oh Rhett, I do love you, I do. I never loved Ashley' had me laughing so hard. You captured her quirky way of thinking so perfectly. Evil cliffe!! It would be unthinkable for William to have been turned already! Please say it isn't so! I'm really enjoying this fic. I"m on tenterhooks til the next chap! Guh!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!! *Hugs* I'm glad you like the fic and that I could make you laugh as well. Thank you for the complement. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2008 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

I love your story and Buffy's inner musings. I can't wait
to read what happens when William and Buffy meet.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Keep reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2008 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

Oh good (at last Willow tried) to think of a solution that Spike won't remember that William met Buffy. Hopefully it will be enough.
Oh cliffhanger... it seems everything to point to the fact that Buffy is too late. I hope not...
Looking forward to find out.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll post soon. :)

Reviewer: sam52 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2008 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

oh. my. god.

please dont let her be too late!! please!!!

of course, master rawlings could be speaking of when they referred to him as 'william the bloody' for his poetry. not for the vampire thing!

oh, how i hope so!

i loved it!
=)

p.s.-i love how you use the dialouge in here!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked the dialogue. Keep reading! :)

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2008 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 2: Living London 1880

I really hope she isn't too late... I was looking forward to her wooing William!
I'm really loving this. I have such a soft spot for time travel fics, and this is shaping up to be a really lovely one.
Just a quick point that I thought I'd mention- I'm assuming that Bridget is supposed to be cockney, so if I'm wrong ignore this, but generally speaking she wouldn't miss out her h's, eg. "t’ings". She'd be more likely to pronounce her "th's" as f's, and to miss of t's and g's when they come at the end of words. Sorry for being so annoyingly picky, but being English, I thought it might be helpful for future reference.

Love this story. Hope there's more to come!


Author's Response: No worries at all. I appreciate all comments. I'm not really sure what accent I was going for...but I'll keep your comments in mind if I write more Bridget dialogue. Thanks so much for reading.

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