[Report This]Date: 05/29/2008 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Oh I love William and Buffy. This is so sweet. Maybe she can get stuck back in time. I love it.
Author's Response: Hmm, stuck back in time with William. I could go for that....although, I would seriously miss my hairdryer. LOL! Thanks for the lovely review and for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2008 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Loving this fic! I always love to see a fic with William in it! But how is Buffy going to change the future with these acts? Looking forward to seeing more of this ASAP, please!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
Author's Response: Willow's spell ensures that William will have a "ghost" of a memory of being loved so that he won't die in the Hellmouth unloved by anyone. *Wink* don't worry it will all work out!! lol! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
More problems for Buffy? A chaperone could complicate her plan.
Ah a sleepy Mrs. Fairfax is to bear :)
Awe, they even managed to get time of their own! Loved the end of the chapter / how the chapter ended.
Author's Response: When has anything in the world of Buffy been easy? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Wonderful chapter, and I loved Anne and her take on Buffy and William together. Using those words about Buffy from canon, like delivering him from mediocrity, makes me feel that Buffy is going to leave the time after having much more of an effect on William than she realizes. There are so many things in their plan for time-traveling but then blurring William's memories that could go wrong, and the timing of William's turning, and I can't wait to see more!
Great update, more soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Will it or won't it effect his turning? *Leaves June wondering....* Thanks for the review!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Wow, what a long and nice chapter!
It was worth the wait, I loved it how you showed both of their reactions to the kisses.
I
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing Maddonna. I love knowing what you think of things.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 - 02:10 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Oh wow, this is an Amazing story, I'm LOVING It!!!!!! :) I love the Time Travel, and it's SO Funny to see Buffy trying to act all proper, LOL!!!! :) You nail the characters of William and Buffy, and everyone else too!!!!!! Awww.....I really Loved the picnic, it was SO Sweet!!!! And I especially LOVED the last chapter!!!! :) Your description of their feelings and kiss, was SO Beautiful and Breathtaking!!!!! :) I'm definitely hooked, and I Can't Wait to read more to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Again, Awsome job/story so far and please keep up the Amazing work!!!!!!!!!! :) Thanks for sharing!! :)
Take Care,
Amber :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I've posted another chapter. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2008 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
You may get bored with me constantly repeating myself, but I say again that I love this story. You're pacing it perfectly and I'm enjoying how they are getting to know each other without all of the baggage from their future life. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Bored? Pfff. I'm so grateful that you take the time to review and let me know how I'm doing. Thanks so much for always being so considerate. And once again, thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2008 - 11:58 pm Title: Chapter 5: One Good Day
Lovely update, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: ...And thank you for reading and reviewing!
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