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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2008 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

*wonders* This chapter doesn't make sense; William is suffering because of something what Buffy wrote (I guess, not told William), Buffy is waiting for William to make contact.
Someone interfered and that someone seems to be Rawlings with the help of Mrs. Fairfax.
Till soon I hope! *repost*

Author's Response: Interfered....someone is on the right track. Thanks so much for being so involved and trying to work out the plot. I love it. Thanks for reading and for the review!!!!

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

You are evil. I need the update. I thought I must of missed a chapter when I started reading.

Author's Response: Why thank you! *smirk* No, you didn't miss anything. I wanted the chapter to work backwards, so to speak, you'll find out what I mean in part two. Thanks so much for your review and keep reading!!!! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

Great to see this updated and I will be in agony until you get all this horror straightened out for William! At first I was thinking Dru slipped into his mind and made false memories, but if it was something as weak as a note with Buffy's name on it then there's hope for a quicker resolution! And Rawlings should be smacked around a bit by the Slayer IMHO.
Great chapter and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I was hoping for responses like this...trying to puzzle out the plot and waiting for the next chapter. You made my day!!! Will post the next chapter shortly....it's off to my beta.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

Oooooooh I hate that nasty Rawlings! They'd better figure out his machinations soon, I suspect Buffy might get impatient and go to visit William's mum to make enquiries about him and find out he's not out of town at all!
Congrats on your graduation!

Author's Response: THANKS SO MUCH!!! It was a blast. I wanted you to hate Rawlings...I'm glad that worked out! *hehe* Thanks so much for the review and I'll update soon!!

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 03:42 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

So am I to assume that Rawlings sent Buffy a letter supposedly from William stating that William would be away on business while another went to William supposedly from Buffy which said that Wiliam would never be good enough? How positively evil and Shakespearean. So...may I hope that the next chap involves the slow and exceedingly painful death of Rawlings and could I help in some way? hee...hee

Please don't have William get turned while in this frame of mind. I don't think my poor heart could take it.

Congrats on your graduation!! I'll be waiting anxiously for your next update.

Author's Response: Slow and exceedingly painful death, huh? Maybe I shouldn't write anymore cliffhangers...*gulp* All will be revealed in the next chapter, which has just been sent off to my beta. Thanks also for the congratulations. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2008 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 7: To Make a Mockery Part I

yeh, okay, i'm confused, why do i feel that i missed something? or have you just not explained it yet? like why william seems to think that about buffy, i had to look over the last chapter again to make sure i didn't forget something. i don't get that ending either, hopefully all will be explained soon.

Author's Response: Confusion was my goal...okay not really. I just wanted to throw in a plot twist with a bit of cliffhanger-y-ness. My next chapter will be posted soon. Sorry for the delay. But thank you so much for reviewing!!!!

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