Date: 05/12/2008 - 01:28 pm Title: Ascending
This was a great first chapter. Not sure why Angel would call after six months, though. That seemed a bit out of the blue, but everything else was very good.
Date: 05/05/2008 - 06:38 am Title: Ascending
A very good start to a story.
I loved the details of emotions. good dialouge. Not to much, not to little
Update please!
Date: 05/04/2008 - 05:59 am Title: Ascending
Interesting, but I wasn't too sure of dawns reaction at the end, other than that very good.
Date: 05/04/2008 - 05:35 am Title: Ascending
OOOh wonderful start - cant wait to read more : )
Date: 05/03/2008 - 11:34 pm Title: Ascending
I have to say I so like this story so far. Very interesting to say the least. Angel, being the jerk he is sure knows how to put his foot in his mouth. Trust Dawn to be so loving even after all this time.
Totally can't wait for more. Don't worry about the slow writing thing, it took me a whole month to write my latest chapter lol. Will have to add this to my faves for sure!
Date: 05/03/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: Ascending
But Angel was in contact with Buffy... You told me about that last night. So why did he call just now to tell that Spike died?
Shame on him... he could told that earlier and he better hadn't given Spike the wrong idea.
~ Sounds interesting, I'll check the other chapters too and see how I like your evil Spike.