Date: 04/20/2010 - 03:21 pm Title: Morning After
Great chapter!!!!!
Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:15 pm Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed reading your story and I have to say that for a first try it wad damn good. I really hope you'll write more! Good job!
Date: 06/18/2008 - 05:19 pm Title: Epilogue
LOVED IT! =D
Awsome job =D
xoxo
Date: 06/15/2008 - 12:43 am Title: Epilogue
Nice story -Thanks. I was confused by the part where they went into their old house and sat on the couch - doesn't someone else live there now? They just found a key and went in? It it was still theirs then why the hotel?
Date: 06/12/2008 - 04:37 am Title: Epilogue
Dang! Wish my first attempts were this awesome. You have a natural knack for writing. You've got a future kid.
Although I will admit, the ending felt a little rushed, needs a bit smoother transition next time. But other then that very tastefully done, excellent grammer (which has been so hard to find lately) and a unique story line.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to your next venture!
Date: 06/09/2008 - 08:04 pm Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed this!
Date: 06/08/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: Epilogue
A happy ending! :) I'm glad things worked out nicely.
Date: 06/08/2008 - 08:24 pm Title: Epilogue
Awe, already the end. Good way to end it with this epilogue.
Date: 06/08/2008 - 08:19 pm Title: It's Over
*phew* Even if Spike got into the trap, the fight went well. And good the next chapter is already there :)
Date: 06/08/2008 - 08:15 pm Title: The Fun Begins
Seems Buffy was wrong: It looks like Spike is going into Angelus' trap.
Date: 06/08/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Epilogue
LOVED THIS STORY!! AMAZING ENDING!! i LOVE reading this story and thank u so much for writing this fic. i loved that they had a kid and that angelus died. THANK U again and i CANT wait to read more of your work
Date: 06/08/2008 - 03:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Congratulations on the completion of your first fic! Well done! Enjoyed it--would like to see as your writing progresses.
Date: 05/26/2008 - 09:34 pm Title: Not Again
Boy this sure wasn't Spike and Buffy's day! Hope Buffy is ok! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 05/26/2008 - 08:33 pm Title: Not Again
Not having Internet sucks; good to see you back.
Phew, almost gone wrong. So Spike is safe now; very stupid of Buffy to go back alone without contacting Spike's watchers. Evil cliffhanger :)
Date: 05/26/2008 - 06:02 pm Title: Not Again
SHIT I CANT BELIEVE SHE WAS DUMB ENOUGH TO GO BACK AND NOW ANGELUS HAS HER!! I REALLY HOPE THAT SHES OK AND THAT SPIKE SAVES HER AND THAT EVERYTHING WORKS OUT WELL. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX
Date: 05/26/2008 - 07:46 am Title: Not Again
Aww man I hate cliffhangers! Great chapter though, I love the Angelus is in on the hit. Please update soon.
Date: 05/18/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Aftermath
You have me on the edge of my seat! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 05/17/2008 - 10:52 am Title: Aftermath
Silly Buffy, she shouldn't have brought the parcel inside with her in case it was a bomb.
Good that Buffy is staying; going won't stop the others coming for her.
Kind of an evil cliffhanger, huh? More soon I hope.
Date: 05/17/2008 - 10:48 am Title: Welcome to NY
:-D Good to see I was right about the buyer; this way Spike kept quite in contact with Buffy.
Uh-huh.. Spike was called back? Then I hope he wasn't in the car. I had a bad feeling when Buffy felt watched.
Date: 05/17/2008 - 01:17 am Title: Aftermath
Uh oh...hope Spike doesn't shut down on her. Hope they make it out okay. Can't wait for more!!
Date: 05/17/2008 - 01:06 am Title: Welcome to NY
Oh wow!!! She's gonna think he's dead. They're after him again aren't they?
Date: 05/16/2008 - 06:47 am Title: Aftermath
Awesome chapter, I'm glad we're getting some suspense. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 05/16/2008 - 02:49 am Title: Aftermath
OMG I HOPE HER MOMS OK!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THANX!!
Date: 05/16/2008 - 02:46 am Title: Welcome to NY
OMG HE BETTER NOT BE HURT!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to find out wat happens next. THANX!!
Date: 05/15/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Welcome to NY
That was mean!
I hope an update is coming soon. I don't think my heart could take anymore torture.