Date: 08/28/2008 - 05:44 am Title: Fourteen
I'm so loving where you're taking us! This is highly entertaining and I feel underlying angst but it's so mild that I almost missed it. If you plan on something major, I'll love that, too. After all, I'm a total slut for angst.
And...if you're still looking for a beta, send me an email.
Date: 08/17/2008 - 10:49 pm Title: Fourteen
loved it please let there be more i want to know wat happens
Date: 08/06/2008 - 05:44 am Title: Fourteen
it's great to see them being friends, and have buffy be all protective of william. poor boy - he's had it bad for a while now. and go buffy with the temptress role. great chapter. also, the love comment felt perfectly natural to me.
Date: 08/05/2008 - 07:18 am Title: Fourteen
hey,I had a lot of catching up to do re many of stories lately,but I gotta tell u,this one still makes my heart smile
Date: 08/04/2008 - 03:04 pm Title: Fourteen
Poor William, that flashback certainly was embarrassing. I'm so glad Joyce didn't force him to come out. And I think William was very smart to seek out the help he felt he needed. Wonderful closing scene. ;) Fantastic update!
Date: 08/04/2008 - 08:31 am Title: Fourteen
Great chapter, I can't wait to read what happens next.
Date: 08/04/2008 - 03:58 am Title: Fourteen
loved it:) hehe.... can't wait for the next chapter and loved the flashback in this chapter haha
Date: 08/04/2008 - 03:29 am Title: Fourteen
AMAZING, LIKE ALWAYS!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i love that u write it in both the past and present and i just want to say u do it perfectly. i love that balance between the present and past and really enjoy reading how u write the developing plot. ne ways i hope that things continue to get more intimate between will and her and that they do get together soon. also again i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Date: 08/04/2008 - 02:27 am Title: Fourteen
I wasn't at all surprised with his "I love you" but I can't wait for Buffy to realize just how much he loves her. I absolutely LOVE this story. The bits and pieces of their childhood is great.
Although angst is inevitable, I can't wait for the next update. :)
Date: 08/03/2008 - 08:59 pm Title: Fourteen
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 08/03/2008 - 06:10 pm Title: Fourteen
Love this story it should be up for an award.
Author's Response: Thanks. It is. This story has been nommed at the Cradle of Humanity Awards and at the Sunny D Awards. :D
Date: 08/03/2008 - 06:04 pm Title: Fourteen
Awe, poor William :) Buffy was a strain for his libido, too sexy for him already *g* These years must have been hard for William do 'endure' in a way.
Glad to see them so happy at the present time. Looking forward to more (and wonder what will happen after Buffy has to leave again, going back to the States and William staying there).
Date: 08/03/2008 - 05:52 pm Title: Fourteen
How could anyone NOT love your William? He's adorable. I always get a big smile on my face whenever I see this story has been updated and this chapter definitely didn't disappoint. Loved it, and can't wait for more! :)
Date: 08/03/2008 - 04:03 pm Title: Fourteen
Thought I missed a chapter.. like him carrying her to the bedroom and ... But now we are on a road trip..
Hmm... and still love William especially since he has developed that "hot sexuality" yet seems to love the take charge women . Must have been a good psychiatrist.. LOL
Enjoying..
Author's Response: Hehehe
Sorry-there will be more naughtiness soon.
Date: 08/03/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Fourteen
Yes I still love your William, why wouldn't I? He's hot and smart and funny and did I say hot? Loved William, loved the update but I want him to be mine!
Author's Response: But, he's mine. :P Thanks. I was a little worried that I might just be making him too quirky for you all.