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Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2008 - 07:42 am Title: Seventeen

wow! ok, i love how you're delving deeper into william's insecurities and all the negative labels he's attached to himself over the years. it's raw and feels real and i'm all worried for him and defensive of him and a little concerend that buffy has no clue. also, this is HOT. ;)

Reviewer: claire Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2008 - 02:28 am Title: Seventeen

Ooh, so happy to see another chapter! I feel bad for poor Will, though. I wish he'd confess, or Liam would give Buffy a clue, because otherwise he's in for some heartbreak. I also wanted to say that I'm impressed that you put William on medication for his anxiety, instead of having him just "grow out of it." Because his introversion and social problems seemed pretty serious, and deserved to be dealt with seriously. (Not a big serious plot point, but with respect, I mean.)

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2008 - 04:30 pm Title: Seventeen

Oh no.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 - 03:56 pm Title: Seventeen

Looks like Buffy brought out a new side of William. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Great chapter!

Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 05:52 pm Title: Seventeen

Gulps. Wow that was hot... Please post the next chapter... you can't just leave it hanging like that!!!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 08:13 am Title: Seventeen

Great chapter, I like when they interact without sex being involved. The chapters were kinda starting to blend together with it being constant sex. But anyways great chapter and I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 07:47 am Title: Seventeen

Awww I love you! Write faster...update more! I'm really enjoying this story. xox

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 05:55 am Title: Seventeen

Interesting, I wonder when shell figure out he loves her.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Seventeen

I react to stories as if they were RL.. and that can be a problem sometimes.. but I realize it is just a story so bear with me.

Buffy is far too immature.. emotionally and is still in the land of best friends. As much as Will loves Buffy and always will .. Angel or someone needs to intervene before this relationship sends him off the deep end.

Will needs someone that wants and needs him. That is not where Buffy is at this time. If he is on medication now just to be able to talk in front of students.. what will happen will he accidently lets out the word love and Miss I am having a good time having sex with my Teacher and Best Friend Will gets that deer caught in the head light look on her face. Like "Who Knew"?

Things seem to be getting quickly over the top for Will and right now I say send the little Pop Princess home. Obviously she is an imitation of our Kentwood Louisiana darling in that teenybopper Catholic girl outfit. What else will he do to prove to her he is a man and not the boy she knew in the U.S.

And the guilt trip about his "sexual feelings" for her when she was a little girl..low blow. Time to let Will be Will.. And as far as I am concerned .. let Buffy go home.

Sorry.. I do like the story but you need to add angst to your description.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2008 - 12:10 am Title: Seventeen

Didn't think William would react like that. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Brittany Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 11:16 pm Title: Seventeen

You are absolutely evil fro ending that chapter there!!!!

Reviewer: pheonia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 10:41 pm Title: Seventeen

whew... buffy is... not so bright.

get on my knees=kinky??

oh yes happy thanksgiving ^^

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: Seventeen

OMG HOW COULD U END IT THERE AND HOW IS SHE SO CLUELESS!?!?!?! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i CANT believe that she took his statement as him being kinky and not him loving her, how can she not see his love for her??? also its not that i dont like liam, hes cool, i just really cant stand her with anyone else, even if its only an illusion, ill just have to read how it plays out to see if i like him. i really hope that william doesnt freak her out with this little game and that she finally realizes that he loves her soon. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX SO MUCH!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 09:36 pm Title: Seventeen

No need to duck :)
Buffy isn't aware that Spike loves her, don't want another girl. No need to worry for him or wonder why he hasn't a girlfriend.
And she couldn't know that her costume hit a bit too much the truth.
Enjoyed :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: Seventeen

Oh silly, clueless Buffy. She has no idea that Will loves her. :( The role playing was kinda confusing...Will was so upset but then got into it , not sure how to think about that. I'm afraid Buffy is gonna break poor Will's heart and leave and get a bf after her "lessons".

Thanks for the update, more soon please. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2008 - 05:33 pm Title: Seventeen

So sad that Buffy hasn't got a clue. That she knew he had had sex with Drusilla and seems to be quite "good in the bedroom" .. and he would have problems picking up girls..

Will almost let his feelings be known with the little girl outfit but quickly fell into the game. And where did the bad man come from.. guess sex with Buffy in a game is better than not having her at all.. Kinda of Sad really.

Waiting for his breaking point.. and my best guess is when she decides she wants to play the game with someone else.

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