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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 03:27 am Title: Sickness

i like this one it is different

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Date: 05/29/2008 - 07:40 pm Title: Sickness

So it was poison that killed Buffy. I wonder who sent it.
Seems to me for now that Spike turned her after she was dead? Not sure but I'll keep reading and find out hen, huh? Enjoyed the update.

Reviewer: quirks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2008 - 01:54 am Title: Sickness

Wow! That was a great and surprising reveal. Interesting story. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 09:58 pm Title: Sickness

Really enjoying this! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Sickness

I know people in fanon use Sire to mean different things. In your story, does Spike being Buffy's Sire just mean he watches out for her, or is there an actual connection between them shown in more than just his action in that way?
Um, little suggestion? Maybe you should make Buffy's black-out clearer or the fact that she does fade away, because it's suddenly goes from her angry thoughts to Spike and calling her lifeless, but maybe that's because she's not moving... Unless something big happens before she dies that we can't know about yet. Good job of being vague but still keeping details and the story interesting!
Great chapter and wonderful to see Joyce and Spike together.

Author's Response: More about the Sire thing will be addressed in the next chapter : ) I'm trying not to blurt everything out in the first chapters... but I want to! Intrigue, mystery! I love suggestions! In this case, I kept Buffy angry until the end. She died angry at the fact that she wasn't getting a defining moment. If it confuses a bunch of people I might go back and re-word it to make it a bit more definite. Thanks for the review and suggestion, both are much appreciated : )

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 04:40 pm Title: Sickness

Now I'm intrigued. Spike turned her to 'save' her? If Buffy's 18 it's season 3, so where's Angel then? More soon please.

Author's Response: This will be answered in a flashback in a future chapter, promise!

Reviewer: sanityfair Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 - 02:37 pm Title: Sickness

Interested to read more. Hope you'll update soon.

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