Date: 09/30/2008 - 11:54 am Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I really love this story. The only advice I can give you however is to get a beta to read through your chapters to pick up the tiny mistakes that Microsoft Word may miss for eg: "stay her for a couple of days" instead of "here". The beta will also help you in your paragraphing, in which in itself will help create a greater and tension filled atmosphere.
All round I have to say Well Done!
Date: 06/05/2008 - 09:54 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Wow I must say that this story is becoming very ineteresting! Nicely done with the writing! Hope for more! I wanna see if Buffy the chosen one is able to hold front against this rather sinfully sexy man! hmmmmmmm I wonder! lol! Can't wait and plz don't let us wait too long for an update!
Date: 06/05/2008 - 05:23 am Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
DAMN, THAT WAS HELLA GOOD!!LOVED IT AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX
Date: 06/05/2008 - 02:00 am Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
thisone is funny especially the names look foward to more
Date: 06/04/2008 - 07:50 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Oops - I just noticed what I wrote. I've meant: I haven't read Niamh's story so I can't compare these too.)
So Buffy needs to rest? Seem she doesn't think so ;-)
Big surprise for Spike.
I wonder if she would have beat him if she wasn't hurt.
More battles with words ahead? ~ Looking forward to more. (BTW - you could use some more space between the paragraphs too. Seems to me as if they have vanished.)
Date: 06/04/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
What a wonderful start to what promising to be a fabulous story! Keeping my fingers crossed that you'll be giving us regular updates on this one.
Date: 06/04/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I really like this story so far, and Spike is shown great. Can't wait to see the verbal sparring between them and how Spike will enjoy having the upper hand for now!
Good writing.
Date: 06/04/2008 - 01:33 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
A battling princess and a Sexy leader who could ask for anything more? I will!!! And say write more!!!
Date: 06/04/2008 - 01:32 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Ooo! Great opening and I like the style to this stoory I look forward to seeing more of it it has great chemisty.
Date: 06/04/2008 - 06:43 am Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
Oh I like....I like a lot! heehee.... I can't wait to see the rest! I can totally see Spike as a Roman and Buffy as a Celt!
Date: 06/04/2008 - 02:36 am Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
I love this please write more its very cool
Date: 06/03/2008 - 10:40 pm Title: Never Let Your Guard Down
yeh, uhmmmm....like, this is totally sexy. lol! I do so adore fics like this. Wanna read more! :)