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Reviewer: Anni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 5

So Anya's back to her vengeance, Willow's been told off and carted off to the coven, Xander's learning a few home truths and there's the claim to tie up loose ends. Perfect {sigh}. All that's missing is Angel hitting the roof when he learns about it!
Wonderful fic, thanks!

Author's Response: I really wanted Anya to walk out on Xander for once. And I would have loved to show Angel freaking out, but I couldn't figure out a way to do it naturally within the context of the story. I'm so glad you liked this! Thank you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 08:34 am Title: Chapter 4

So Buffy's chucked Willow out. Yay! I always wondered why it was Tara who left when she hadn't done anything wrong and Willow who stayed when it was she who was causing all the problems. It wasn't logical.
Glad to see Anya sticking up for herself and confronting Xander's obsession with Buffy.
Glad to see Buffy finally making progress, all because of Spike.
But... I wonder what AngryWillow is going to cook up now?

Author's Response: In canon, Tara was walking out. Here, Buffy chucked Willow out. And I always wanted Anya to whack Xander just once for the way he treated her!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter 3

Good for Spike, doing that little demonstration for Giles, Bit risky testing Tara's protection that way though! I wonder what Willow had intended? Also good for Giles, finally accepting he had to do something about Willow.
So Buffy took what she wanted... I wonder how she's going to react come morning. I can't wait!

Author's Response: Spike's wouldn't care about the risk, if it was for Buffy. :D And Buffy's reckless now as well. I'm so glad you're liking this!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2008 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter 4

great conversations

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

Amazing story, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Last chapter will be up tomorrow.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

Poor Spike... he must think the worst (well he does). I hope for him that he is wrong and Buffy has feelings for him.
Willow talked too much (but so did Xander); and both have to fear the consequences now. It's time for that.
Ah Buffy knows what she does to Spike and tries to make up for it. That's a start indeed.
~ Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: You know Buffy - two steps forward and one back. Neither Willow or Xander ever think about consequences, do they? Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4

"...not as Watcher to demon, but as man to man. He nodded wryly, acknowledging that."

Actually, I really liked, enjoyed seeing this interaction between Giles & Spike. I liked seeing this side of Giles again, in lieu of the currently very present persona of villain he's been portrayed as (and don't get me wrong, I have totally enjoyed and gotten into many a one of those stories!) as well as master of intrigue; even in the comix he has been the same.
Very interested in seeing where you take him in this, and if he continues, now that his eyes are opened to the sitch, to have the Scoobies' best interest at heart himself, including Willow, especially Buffy, and with this, seemingly even Spike. This speaks on a literally human level--man to man; testosterone essentials in group dynamics (maybe Xander should stop dipping into Dad's stash or grow his own pair).
But this chapter also speaks of something else---progress. But in such a way apparently that the outcome is not quite foroseeable. It seems like a relay of 'Two Steps Forward, One Step Back'. He has slyly and slowly brought Buffy back to where she can feel, at least sensation, and need and/or desire it as well; but also to where she can tell now that there are preferences, choices within it... another step forward...but what will the step back then be? And will Spike be the one to pay that price again? He has been willing so far; with the prize, perhaps only just revealed to him as a bonus, that she at least feels something for him, more than for a nobody. That is 'something'...but more, SHE realized there was something and wanted to give something of herself...and that, therein, is the beginning of caring, even maybe loving... but again, what will the steps backward be? You know you're killing us with the anticipation, right? More, please, SOON??? (Thanks!)
~~Kara~~


Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You saw everything I was trying to do here! I personally liked the earlier, honestly mistaken, non-Machiavellian Giles. And with Buffy it's always 'two steps forward, one back.' The last chapter will be up tomorrow. I'm so glad you're liking this. It was so slight a story that I nearly didn't post it.

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

Completly agrre with Spike (in fact with you). Buffy and Xander are crueler than Spike and Anya, they suffer too much because of their fault, i think they're more innocent in their love than Buffy and Xander.

I hope the next eagerly.

Author's Response: It's strange. The humans (the Scoobies) are so much more callous and uncaring than the demons (Spike and Anya)! I'm so glad you like the story.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is an absolute wonder of a tale! Hot sex too!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved it, especially this line:
She saw the incredulous look he gave her, his eyes almost black within a thin ring of blazing, intense blue, helpless behind eyelids heavy with passion.

Your words are like music to my ears. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! Next chapter's up.

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2008 - 04:39 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm enjoying your story; do have a question though, British person, what the heck is/are plimsolls??

Author's Response: It's a British term for those very thin sneakers with canvas tops and rubber soles. Those used to be the only athletic shoes around for ages, from 1860-1960 and Spike, being Brit and 120 yrs old, would likely think of that term first. I'm Canadian, but my guy's a Brit and he said, "Well, we say 'plimsolls' even now," so I used it. We had a bet on whether anyone would ask. :D

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 3

wow that was absolutely amazing. i just started reading this today and all ready i want more. i love how spike told giles off he deserved it and hopefully willow and xander will wake up and realize whats going on around them. can't wait to see where this goes next.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! The next chapter will be up tomorrow. I'm just proofing it now.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Spike taught Giles a lesson. Took him (Giles) a while to believe that Willow needs help. Sounds as if he'll act now.
Loved bossy Buffy :) She found her own heaven too.
Still enjoying the story.

Author's Response: I never could understand why Giles didn't ever get Willow a teacher, especially after her 'my will be done' spell. I'm so glad you're liking this!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

A relief indeed to have money when nothing is left from the heritage to pay more bills. Loved the scene with the cat, cute :))
And very very thoughtful of Tara to get rings for them. And for her too. I fear they'll need it.
Enjoyed the update :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And my 3 month old Aby kitten did exactly that when my guy growled at it. I broke up and couldn't resist putting it in here.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good start :) The twist with the anger works. Loved the "POVS". Very intense, the chapter (and description how Buffy felt / is now).

Author's Response: Anger seems to fit Buffy's character better than apathy and that whole exasperating story arc that came out of it. I'm so glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Trisha B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

i wouldn't mind hot spike sex heaven right about now!!!!!! lol

Author's Response: Oo-oh yeah! :D

Reviewer: Immortal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I really like the way Spike forced Giles to listen. Very Spike!

Author's Response: Spike always takes risks. Thank you for liking this!

Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved the chapter, especially the kitten part, that was so funny and cute. And I liked Tara in this chapter, good that she gave Buffy and Spike the rings she had charmed, to protect them from Willow's spells. And that kiss :p was really something... You're a great author, sweetie! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That kitten part really happened with my guy and my 3 month old Aby kitten, and I couldn't resist putting it in.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2008 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMFG! Way to go Spike! Always imagined it being played out like that just never had the words to describe it and et you did it so well! Thanx for the chap sweetie and hopin for more!

PS
Wooo! Thanx to that I so need a smoke! LOL!

Author's Response: More coming. I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you! And I needed a smoke when I was writing it! :D

Reviewer: Lluvia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like it, a lot. I can't wait to read the next. I love Tara, she has a good idea with the rings.

Author's Response: Thank you! Tara would think of something like that., to protect not harm.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

I've already reviewed chapter 1, but I think it was on another site! LOL
Anyway... I just love the twist you've given the beginning of season 6. I think Buffy's anger as you've portrayed it is far more in character than the self-absorbed detachment she showed on the show. As a 'How it should have been' I think you've come up trumps. Can't wait for the Tabula Rasa not to affect Buffy, Spike or Tara!

Author's Response: I thought the anger made more sense too. I really disliked her detachment and the whole story arc that was created by that. I'm so glad you like the way this is going!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Out of all te rewrites of S6 I've seen thus far this is one of the best from what I've read so far.
The characters are vivid, well defined and perfectly plausible. In fact as far as "should have beens" concerning this particular period go this is incredible.

Can't wait to read the full story!

PS LOVE the rings!

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you so much! I was worried that I'd changed canon too much to be believable. I'm so glad that you think it is plausible.

Reviewer: Trisha B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

liked it. continue soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm just cleaning up the next chapter and will have it up tomorrow.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2008 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

OH MY GOD. you cant leave it there. well unless you are going to update for the third time today :) I love pretty much everything about this story. Its great. please update again :) lol

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! I'm just cleaning up the next chapter and will have it up tomorrow.

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