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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2008 - 04:01 pm Title: 3

Hot! :) I don't think he can stay away from her ;)

Author's Response: Me either darling! xx

Author's Response: Me either darling! xx

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: 3

Absolutely loved it - all those sparks and sexual tension. Buffy must not listen to William - well perhaps she'll have to until she's 18 - unless she wants a prison pass!!!. Is Joyce aware of the sparkage between them or was she meaning Buffy would enjoy the barbeque per se? Not sure William's going to seek Buffy out. She may have to go to him. I've waffled on enough now - I loved it. Oh I said that at the beginning, should have just left it at that.

Author's Response: I don't think Joyce does see it - she is lovely and kind but she's not always the smartest Mom. Hope you're still reading and enjoying darling!!! x

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: 3

I am loving this story...could just feel that tension between them. post more soon

Author's Response: The next chapter is up - I hope you enjoy it darling! Thanks for the review :D

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:20 am Title: 3

ahhhh I love it i love it!! Please keep writing I love this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much honey! SO pleased you're enjoying it! Me and the muse are beaming :D

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:24 am Title: 3

No! No staying away! :D

Author's Response: Temptation is tough to endure, it's true! *bg*

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:42 pm Title: 3

Uh ohhh! Like she'll actually be able to stay away.
Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Teehee it is Buffy and William.. they crave what's bad for them! *hugs* Glad you're enjoying it and thank you so much for the comment!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:35 pm Title: 3

:) The dress worked like a charm. So it was worth the money it cost.
But William is running... wonder what Buffy will (be able to) do now. Seems as if William was listening to the voice of reason. *crosses fingers*

Author's Response: A killer dress is the essential part of any pulling kit! *bg* Hope you enjoy Chapter 4.. *whispers* It's posted already!

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: 3

First of all I'd like to state that this chapter has made ravenously hungry and I'm currently devouring some meat products.
Second of all the story is well written and cannot help but make us want for more!

Author's Response: LOL If Chapter 3 did that to you, I think you need to prepare yourself before your read Chapter 4 (which I've just posted!) Thank you for the lovely review and compliment! *hugs*

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 06:48 pm Title: 3

Wow--sparks a flying! Excellent update! Looking forward to the next....

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks darling, glad you're enjoying my story! Chapter 4 is up :D

Reviewer: asha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: 3

this is a great story so far, hope u update soon! i'll be looking out for it

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is up now - thanks for the review honey, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: 3

ERRR WHY DID HE HAVE TO KISS HER AND LEAVE, HE KNOWS HE WANTS HER SO HE SHOULD HAVE JUST GIVEN IN!! i LOVE this story and am so happy taht u updated. i cant believe that he kissed her and then told her to stay away from, ha like hes going to stay away from her. i totally think she should use angel to make him jealous, as long as she doesnt actually fall for him. i really hope that they get meet up again soon and that they get closer. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX

Author's Response: LOL Temptation is hard honey - giving in is only half the fun!! *hugs* I hope you enjoy Chapter 4 - its up now. Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews and suggestions, they are very helpful!!!!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:29 pm Title: 3

Just started reading this story and now I'm hooked. I want more! *lol* Loved it.

Author's Response: LOL Yay!!!! *hugs* Your wish is my command... Chapter 4 is up and ready to read! Glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Spikesluv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:20 pm Title: 3

So very well done!!
Keep up the great work!! :)

All the Best
Spikesluv aka Sabrina

Author's Response: *bg* Thank you so much honey, glad you're reading and enjoying!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:06 pm Title: 3

Whooo hooo that last scene was intense. Great job writing this story - I am really enjoying it and can't wait until the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Chapter 4 is up and ready to read! Glad you're enjoying it sweetie x

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 03:14 pm Title: 3

Oh I just jumped onboard with this - and am I ever glad I did!!

Nice and slow build up, with the background and great ust!!

Loving it and looking forward to more!!

Author's Response: *bg* Yay!!!! You're review made me so happy - I was really conscious about diving into soon or not diving quick enough so I'm glad you think the pace is right (and the UST is good!)

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 03:03 pm Title: 3

The moment in front of the sink could have been Buffy having a fantasy or real up to the very last moment. Wasn't sure which it was at first and had to reread. Very good scene.

Author's Response: Ahhhh see I never thought of that! I see what you mean :D But yes, it was very definitely real... Buffy may have dreamt it before but she got to live her dream out this time. *sigh* Lucky girl... Glad you're still enjoying it darling!

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 02:28 pm Title: 3

That last bit is absolutely amazing. The whole story is great, but that last bit is just soooo hot. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I hope Chapter 4 is hotter then :D *hugs* Thank you for the great review, it makes me and the muse very happy!!!!!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/22/2008 - 01:06 pm Title: 3

Yikes! *throws a tomato at William's head* What was that guy thinking?! *LOL* Needless to say, you got me on the hot seat now. What will happen next? *bites nails*

Author's Response: *eep - ducks missiles* LOL Glad you enjoyed Chapter 3 honey - plenty more action on the way! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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