[Report This]Date: 06/25/2008 - 06:03 am Title: 4
"What’s with the screeching and the spontaneous exercise?”. Its just a classic Xander line! absolutely loved it.
Wonder what her date with Angel will bring. Hopefully she will quickly realize the mistake of taking that path. But then hopefully William will be shaken out of his passivity too...
The striptease at the end was excellent!!!!!!! More like that is of the good ; )
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, I like that line to. I'd typed it before I'd really thought of it.. those are usually the best lines!!!
And I'm gearing up for some more NC17 action :p
Thanks for your review darling! x
[Report This]Date: 06/25/2008 - 05:41 am Title: 4
God. I love it. I love those forbidden relationships and that helpless pull that they have toward each other. So damn hot. Great job!
Author's Response: Teehee!!! Forbidden is definitely my kink for sure - glad you're sharing in the indulgence darling! x
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2008 - 06:39 pm Title: 4
I hope Spike gets with another woman too. It is always Buffy who gets to date someone else. While Spike is getting jealous of Buffy and her boyfriend.
I like jealous Buffy more. Something we didn't get to see that much on the show. Shows her how much Spike/William means to her.
Author's Response: This has occurred to me but I'm going to wait it out and see where the story takes me - its currently guiding me rather than me guiding it! But you're right, Spike should give Buffy some of her own medicine!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2008 - 01:32 pm Title: 4
Great chapter hon!!!
Hope Buffy will make Spikey boy a little jealous.. ;)
Hugs
Spikesluv
Author's Response: Teehee that's the plan! Buffy is playing games but I don't think she knows the rules somehow! x
[Report This]Date: 06/24/2008 - 02:32 am Title: 4
Wow, I loved it. Keep up the updates.
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is up darling - hope you're still reading and enjoying!!! x
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 10:22 pm Title: 4
I am loving how fast you are updating and hope you are able to keep it up because I love this story and hope to see more of it soon :) Hopefully William will see Buffy with Angel and realize that he made a mistake by leaving her in the kitchen.....
Author's Response: So far, so good! *hugs* So pleased you're enjoying his honey x
Author's Response: So far, so good! *hugs* So pleased you're enjoying his honey x
Author's Response: So far, so good! *hugs* So pleased you're enjoying his honey x
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:46 pm Title: 4
YES, GOOD ON BUFFY, HE NEEDS TO BE PUSHED OVER THE EDGE SO HE CAVES AND GETS WITH HER!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe angel asked bufy out and she excited about it, i hope nothing happens between them. i really hope that she continues to tease william and that nothing happens between her and angel. also i hope that william gives in and that they get together soon. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX
Author's Response: LOL Yes, evil Buffy will push William right to the edge!!! But can she handle him? *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: 4
William takes it harder than Buffy, Buffy was only dreaming, lost in thought. I wonder what she'll do when she meets Angel. Now that she made herself rare he wants her. But what does Buffy really want? Something to look forward to (well not to a S/B part but to the new chapter).
Author's Response: I think Buffy is confused and she's throwing herself into this game without reading the rules... so she's making them up!!! *hugs* Glad you're enjoying the story darling x
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 09:07 pm Title: 4
ahh i loved it! can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Yay :D Chapter 6 is up!
Hope you're still reading and enjoying honey x
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 08:47 pm Title: 4
Wicked, wicked Buffy. Teasing poor William. Don't we all wish we had the chance?
Author's Response: Hell yes... I think Buffy is out of her depth though :p xx
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 08:17 pm Title: 4
hahaha I was laughing hysterically throughout this chapter! Yeah William's screwed alright. Great chappy!
Author's Response: *bg* Thank you so much honey!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:21 pm Title: 4
OK I've checked. There is not Buffy/Other warning so is she even going to go and meet Angel? Or does more have to be going on than meeting to constitute "Other"? Poor William (I think I called him Spike in my previous review - sorry) even locking himself away he can't resist Buffy. Yep he's buggered but then so's she. Loved it - as always.
Author's Response: Hey honey, there are Buffy/Other warnings on 5 and 6 but they are MILD!! It won't be graphic - I promise!
And yes, William is TOTALLY buggered... *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: 3
Absolutely loved it - all those sparks and sexual tension. Buffy must not listen to William - well perhaps she'll have to until she's 18 - unless she wants a prison pass!!!. Is Joyce aware of the sparkage between them or was she meaning Buffy would enjoy the barbeque per se? Not sure William's going to seek Buffy out. She may have to go to him. I've waffled on enough now - I loved it. Oh I said that at the beginning, should have just left it at that.
Author's Response: I don't think Joyce does see it - she is lovely and kind but she's not always the smartest Mom. Hope you're still reading and enjoying darling!!! x
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:18 pm Title: 3
I am loving this story...could just feel that tension between them. post more soon
Author's Response: The next chapter is up - I hope you enjoy it darling! Thanks for the review :D
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 03:20 am Title: 3
ahhhh I love it i love it!! Please keep writing I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much honey! SO pleased you're enjoying it! Me and the muse are beaming :D
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2008 - 01:24 am Title: 3
No! No staying away! :D
Author's Response: Temptation is tough to endure, it's true! *bg*
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:42 pm Title: 3
Uh ohhh! Like she'll actually be able to stay away.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Teehee it is Buffy and William.. they crave what's bad for them! *hugs* Glad you're enjoying it and thank you so much for the comment!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:35 pm Title: 3
:) The dress worked like a charm. So it was worth the money it cost.
But William is running... wonder what Buffy will (be able to) do now. Seems as if William was listening to the voice of reason. *crosses fingers*
Author's Response: A killer dress is the essential part of any pulling kit! *bg*
Hope you enjoy Chapter 4.. *whispers* It's posted already!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 07:09 pm Title: 3
First of all I'd like to state that this chapter has made ravenously hungry and I'm currently devouring some meat products.
Second of all the story is well written and cannot help but make us want for more!
Author's Response: LOL If Chapter 3 did that to you, I think you need to prepare yourself before your read Chapter 4 (which I've just posted!)
Thank you for the lovely review and compliment! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 06:48 pm Title: 3
Wow--sparks a flying! Excellent update! Looking forward to the next....
Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks darling, glad you're enjoying my story! Chapter 4 is up :D
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: 3
this is a great story so far, hope u update soon! i'll be looking out for it
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is up now - thanks for the review honey, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:44 pm Title: 3
ERRR WHY DID HE HAVE TO KISS HER AND LEAVE, HE KNOWS HE WANTS HER SO HE SHOULD HAVE JUST GIVEN IN!! i LOVE this story and am so happy taht u updated. i cant believe that he kissed her and then told her to stay away from, ha like hes going to stay away from her. i totally think she should use angel to make him jealous, as long as she doesnt actually fall for him. i really hope that they get meet up again soon and that they get closer. also i hope that everything works out well and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read more. THANX
Author's Response: LOL Temptation is hard honey - giving in is only half the fun!! *hugs* I hope you enjoy Chapter 4 - its up now.
Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews and suggestions, they are very helpful!!!!! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 05:29 pm Title: 3
Just started reading this story and now I'm hooked. I want more! *lol* Loved it.
Author's Response: LOL Yay!!!! *hugs* Your wish is my command... Chapter 4 is up and ready to read! Glad you're enjoying it and thanks so much for the lovely review!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:20 pm Title: 3
So very well done!!
Keep up the great work!! :)
All the Best
Spikesluv aka Sabrina
Author's Response: *bg* Thank you so much honey, glad you're reading and enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 06/22/2008 - 04:06 pm Title: 3
Whooo hooo that last scene was intense. Great job writing this story - I am really enjoying it and can't wait until the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is up and ready to read! Glad you're enjoying it sweetie x
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