I'm so disappointed that it is another older Spike and younger Buffy story. My favorite are the older Buffy and younger Spike. Very few out there.

Anyways, it sounds good so far. This line made me laugh...

"where Angel would finally notice her, be so captivated by her that he wouldn't be able to think of anything else but the goddess that was Buffy "



Oh Buffy. Buffy always had an holier than thou altitude. Like I'm the prettiest girl and you should kneel before the greatness that is Buffy. LOL

Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I love it either way round but my muse plumped for young Buffy this time. Maybe for another fic I will do young Spike? :p Buffy really does have a complex doesn't she! Conversations With Dead People really summed that up I think. Glad you're enjoying the story darling and I'm glad to hear you'll keep reading! Thank you for the comment :)