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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 02:56 pm Title: Reliving

Even as human (Liam) Angel(us) wasn't the best of his kind. Neither when he became Angelus.
But even now he passed? *wonders what's the matter with Spike*

Author's Response: Too much clothing??

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2008 - 12:08 am Title: Reliving

OMG--does this mean Spike fails and must die? Nooooo!!! Say it isn't so! You've got me on the edge of my chair with this fic, so hurry with more of it, please?
~~K.

Author's Response: Spikes not gonna die. I keep him in my room for norty slavery, so the boy wont die.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 11:27 pm Title: Reliving

That was an interesting ride! I enjoyed how Angel was disgusted with the young Liam. It shows growth and maturity, though Angel can still be vain (the hair!) and petty at times (BtVS S7 End of Days when he whines about having had the soul first and Buffy replies, "What are you, TWELVE?!" - lol one of my favourite lines!). I always though Liam was a bit of a bastard. Somehow, I think he and his demon would have got on just fine if they had been together from the start. Being flooded with the 100 years of mayhem must have be overwhelming and set him straight.

I wonder what you will do with a soul-less Spike. Like you said, his demon has kept some of his humanity and the chip has forced him to stop eating 'happy meals on legs.' He is a much more fluid, flexible character, too, so that should help him out.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: I will be playing with soulless spike, no worries. But I get to bend him to me desire. And they are 12, lack of maturity is fun.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 09:22 pm Title: Reliving

I did enjoy your take in the past. It is a much wiser Angel you depict here than most invision (myself included). It is easy to overlook his past, his motivation, his ideals while judging him for his mistakes. However mistakes are an integral part of what makes us human. And Angel does want to become human (at least to reclaim his humanity in the face of all of his past deeds). I've noticed how you skipped over the whole Lawson business and some other not-so-proud moments (tortured by Spike for the Gem, the day he took back...). Anyway, this story is really good and I can't wait to read more (with that being said, I'm going out of town for a week, so no news from me is due to that, not to my losing any interest at all!)
Go on without me, I shall catch up!

Author's Response: I picked out moments that helped move along the story and prove the point I was trying to make at the time. have a great vacation.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: Reliving

Really loving this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks

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