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Reviewer: Jaime Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2008 - 07:01 am Title: Chapter Six

Poor Spike he wanted her to stay and do something other than have sex. He already is falling in love with her.



Author's Response: I know! It's so sad when he's all 'hey, stay and watch a movie with me' and she sort of blows him off.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2008 - 05:06 am Title: Chapter Six

"I—I'm just—we're done...right?" LOL!! Soooooo Buffy! Great job. On to the date ... *spooky evil music* ....

Author's Response: Thanks! Date time! :)

Reviewer: gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2008 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Six

loved it please let there be more it was great i love it

Author's Response: There shall be more! I FINALLY got started on Chapter 7. It's usually smooth sailing once I get a chapter started as far as content goes, it's just a matter of finding a time to write when I can actually concentrate. It's been distraction city around here lately! I'm so glad you're enjoying this fic. I hope I can get that chapter out for you guys soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2008 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Six

I really really like this story. Somehow I really buy the whole, he gets off on having Buffy instead of having drugs. This idea that for Spike love is like a drug, something he immerses himself in completely, lets rule him and is an uncontrollable force. Buffy gets pulled in because of the magnetism of the passion.

This is really beautifully written. I'm going to have to go check out some of your other stories and will be looking forward to more of this one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I hope you like where I go with it. I feel like we still have a lot to cover. Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Now that I have a bit more time to respond: Thank you so much for your compliment on my writing in this story. I'm really proud of this fic in that respect. I know the subject matter isn't everyone's cup of tea---but this is the fic that I really wanted to write and this is the way I wanted to write it. It's special to me in that respect. Whereas Blue is special because it's my first fic and Blood Money is the fic I thought I'd never write. I hope you enjoy all of my fics, and if the others aren't your thing, I hope you continue to enjoy Poison! Thanks!

Reviewer: B12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2008 - 04:59 am Title: Chapter Six

I normally don't read stories like this. Where Spike is in a bad way and he changes for sweet innocent Buffy. I just think there are too many of them and I really don't care for them. Where Buffy is this innocent girl and Spike is not worthy of her. I really don't know why I am giving this a try. But it is good so far.

I feel bad for Spike. Being addicted to drugs is a terrible thing. My best friend had a drug problem. But he was the sweetest person that I have ever known. People always think that just because they do drugs then they are bad people. That is not always true. I would really like to see Spike get better because of himself and not because of Buffy. It could be why I'm reading this story because of my friend having a drug problem.

Author's Response: Well, I hope you like my story. I really don't know if you will or not as there's still a lot to come. Though Spike is making some negative choices in this fic, he is also being hindered a bit by the trauma of his failed relationship and the judgments others are making on him based on the past or how he looks or so on, which is no excuse for his behavior, but he's only human (in this fic). And I definitely, definitely can't stress enough that doing drugs does not make one a bad person. Anyway, I really appreciate all of your comments and you taking the time to read this fic even though it's not what you usually read. I hope your friend is all right now! Thanks!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2008 - 04:45 am Title: Chapter Six

I love how hes already crushing on her. More please soon.

Author's Response: Bad boy or not, he can be awfully cute sometimes. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/14/2008 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Six

good chapter Pandie , I can't stand her loyalty to the big lummox though , I hope she does break up with him, but he's so dense .Update soon,so i can find out happens next.

Author's Response: Riley just drives me crazy. I hope he gets it through his thick skull that SHE DOESN'T WANT TO BE WITH HIM! But we'll see, I guess. Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2008 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Six

I thought I'd check your story out. The start wasn't easy to read for me but I continued to the next chapter. (Spike's behavior doesn't make him very 'lovable' at the moment).
Buffy... yeah, I didn't understand they she is still with Riley. First yes when her father threatened her but now it's her own fault when she stays with him if he betrays her so much. But this (being betrayed) is something that they both have in common.
I wonder what Spike did - was is his fault (drugs, car accident) that somebody died who was dear to Willow?
Looking forward to where this will lead; well I hope Buffy will have seen the last of Riley soon (hey, I can hope, right? *winks*) Really, even if she cheated on him too I wouldn't want to keep him for the long run.
Well I'll be checking out the next chapters and see how it goes (if it gets too dark for me I can always read when finished)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you decided to try it out! It's that first chapter that's really the darkest. Not sure yet if there will be another of those in the story. No more ick like the end of that chapter, though. I think I would hurl. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2008 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Six

Trying to figure out if Buffy is feeling sorry for Spike or is creeping towards an attraction towards him....Can't wait to read more!


P.S. Buffy should find a way to dump Riley!!

Author's Response: I agree! That guy is totally holding her back!

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2008 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Six

Thanks for the update. I'm really liking this story, and can't wait to see where it's headed. This Riley and Buffy date should be really interesting, lol.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm pretty excited about this story. There are so many plot points that we still have to revisit. I'm looking forward to writing the Buffy/Riley date. Those two have some kooky interactions...and now they'll be having them at a fancy restaurant. Hmm.

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2008 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

Good fun! Poor little Spke with nowhere to go! Sure Riley will fall short when compared to the delectable Spike! :)

Author's Response: Riley is so lame! I almost feel sorry for him. Almost! The next chapter should be interesting to write. Off to work on my other fic some more! Thanks!

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