I remember your story - just not your title. Did you change it?
Oh I see - you must have, my comments are only showing with "all comments", not when I go to the comments by chapter. Good to know I'm not imagine things. :)
Finished rereading it now. Glad you didn't take it down and you're re-working it.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, you're not wrong. I did change the title. It was driving me nuts. Glad I didn't lose you, love all of your reviews! I'm working hard to get this up, even without a beta. So, I hope it's okay! Thanks, and more to come! :-)