Hey, I thought you did a real good job on this fic... it made me laugh alot towards the end, really great. I'm not sure if you're gonna end it for now, but anyway great job, thanks for writing!

So happy you updated! William definitely has Spike's self-confidence back in a big way. Funny how self-deprecating Xander is insight-ful guy about "manly" and "fatherly" advice. Whatever the outcome of this transformation, Wililam and Spike will have to merge yet again. Interesting that William is jealous of Buffy having an affair with Spike. Other stories celebrate this perception of the Spuffy relationship. In your story, it makes William uncomfortable. I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter and look forward to what other Spike parts will come out and play.

Was imagining how shocked Buffy must have been! Can't wait for the next update!

You want the Spike. Well William will bring the Spike. Your going to screaming his name pretty soon, luv.

i'm not sure how i feel about this anymore. in a way, it's as if buffy is the one that got bored of who william was, so he felt that he had to change to impress her, and now he's back to being cocky spike when really, i prefer sweet william in this. i don't know why either of them thought they needed to change just to keep the other interested, that's not what marriage should be about.

William changed his appearance back to Spike... but that's just the look. I don't think that it will solve the problem. Looking forward to find out.