You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 - 06:36 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Hi! Just catching up on the story. Loved the break out and your snarky Spike in this chapter!

Now, two things that were a little 'Huh?' for me. First, why would Buffy remember Spike when they had first met? In the string of events that was before she went to France. Why would Buffy grow up with memories of future Buffy? That way it also doesn't make much sense that she needs to forget. Secondly, it is understandable that spike needs to forget, since he will have his formerly 'first' encounter with Buffy in the future and that future coould be changed if he remembers. But it seems to be rather complicated to send Spike to France, have him have sex with a Slayer and take part of a charm originally meant to take Buffy home just to wipe his memory. Just remember how Willow did wipe a lot of memory with a simple spell in Tabula Rasa, lol. For the witch in residence that should be no problem, should it? I know that you probably have future plot points depending on it, but it made me frown because it seemed forced and it might have beeen better to look for another explanation.

Reviewer: Old Time Fan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 03:10 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Yeah, Spike was the one who could have killed Buffy at any time during the early encounters. She only survived because of interuptions, first of which was of course Joyce giving Spike's noggin a floggin with an axe just before he ended her with a giant sized wooden support beam.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Ok, a chance for things to go the way they were.. hmmm I think I take Spikes side.. Magic always has consequences.. interesting how thay have to be connected for it to work..

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 06:36 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Figures Spike would automatically pick up on the sex part... lol! Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Ha! Classic!

"For some weird reason, the witch wants us to have sex!"

Mwaha. It's been done and done again in spuffy fanfic, yet you can't ever get tired of it, can you. I am sooo looking forward to THAT scene. I just know that you are going to rock it.

Sad that Buffy's going home. Can't she stay with snarky Spike some more? He's just so funny and angst-free (mostly). Loving this story and crossing my fingers for an early update. *wink*

/annie

(and also, the toad? how random was that. Loves'it)


Author's Response: I know it's been done before, but this time, if it happens! it will be because they want to! Glad you love Henry! He is my favourite.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 07:48 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

love spike's sassy sarcastic self..and you write a lovely buffy, not so cruel, haha, and well licks lips in anticipation of next chappie...this story is a great ride...

Author's Response: Thank you! it's such fun top write.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 06:13 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Well no problem with the connection, only with the admission to their benefactors. Will Spike keep their sexual liason a secret or blab that they have jumped that hurdle? Also, since the fate of the world depended on Buffy making a journey to her past, does their destiny hinge on their her influence on events that tie into their mutual future? Seems like a big ordeal to endure to just to fail at returning the current slayer of the time. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your interesting comments. I hope the final chapter, which will be soon, will explain everything! Laughs hysterically and runs away to hide!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:59 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

“She killed three men!”

“That’s my girl!” Spike beamed round the room and then fell silent as he realised his glee wasn’t being reciprocated. “Well, I mean, I’m sorry and all that – No, I’m sodding not! Dru’s a vampire. It’s what we do." Ah, classic Spike! Lovely. :)

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Have just updated next chp.

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:26 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

WHOOO! Thats perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

So Buffy will forget anything? Such a pity. It wouldn't have hurt if Buffy had some fond memories of Spike that stayed. Ah well maybe they didn't with her not killing Spike when they met the first time.
I don't think Buffy will have a big problem with the ritual but we'll see. ;)

You must login (register) to review.