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Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:26 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

WHOOO! Thats perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/07/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

So Buffy will forget anything? Such a pity. It wouldn't have hurt if Buffy had some fond memories of Spike that stayed. Ah well maybe they didn't with her not killing Spike when they met the first time.
I don't think Buffy will have a big problem with the ritual but we'll see. ;)

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2009 - 09:23 am Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

So Happy to see and update!!! I just LOVE this story! I'm *Always* chomping at the bit for more!!! Hurry with more soon please (and lots too!)
~~Kara

Author's Response: Just updated the story. Do hope you enjoy the next chapter as much.

Reviewer: Spikesgrl43 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2009 - 01:27 am Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

Totally love this story. I haven't been to the site in awhile. Real life getting the best of me. It was so nice to come back and be able to catch up with Spike and Buffy in WWII. Looking forward to future updates. Was thinking as I read this of when Buffy returns to the present. It would be so cool for her to meet the adult/elderly Aurora. Also to see present day Spikes reaction when she returns. Will he have all the memories from their previous encounter. Can't wait to see how it all turns out.
Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments. I think I have covered the lack of modern day memory in this next chapter. But we will see what happens.

Reviewer: Kiska12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 08:07 am Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

Cool story, really enjoyable. Thank you for writing and keep going!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2009 - 10:55 am Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

Yay, Spike and Buffy are back together again! Loved how things have played out so far. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2009 - 03:11 am Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

Thank God for Colonel Monroe! Buffy should beat Quentin Travers, (literally) when she gets back. Just wondering if future Spike will start to "remember" their past together as things are happening...hmm. She wouldn't stake him in the past because he is important to her in the future, you wonder if he will figure how important he really is. Seems that past Spike will be mighty confused until he finds out she is from his own future. Great story!

Author's Response: All the secrets are beginning to unravel now and Spike is hideously confused! Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2009 - 09:54 pm Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

“Go on, Slayer. Don’t hang about. Hell’s waiting for me and I don’t want to annoy anyone in power down there! Oh and the last few days – fun, sweetheart. No complaints at all.”

Spike, cocky to the end! lol Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked Spike in this chapter. Things are hotting up, aren't they?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2009 - 08:45 pm Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

That turned out better than I feared for Spike being in the hands of the Council. But who know how it could have ended if not for Colonel Monroe.
Looking forward to find out what he has planned.

Author's Response: He's playing it by the book, but sometimes that is not enough. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2009 - 05:28 am Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

Wow, Buffy certainly made a bad choice. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Good update!

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 10:03 am Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

Save him, Buffy, save him!
Exciting as always...I really love this story.

Reviewer: Carol (seapea) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2009 - 12:37 am Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

I still really love this story. Probably one of your best. I hope Buffy can rescue Spike here - there is no trusting of the Council, that's for sure.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2009 - 11:17 pm Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

now that wasn't a sensible thing to say to Buffy was it??

loved the update

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

Ah I feared it - leaving Spike behind wasn't such a good move. I don't trust the Council very far (especially because for them Spike is just a vampire. What now? Mmmmmh looking forward to find out. I hope Aurora will be well.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/12/2009 - 10:44 pm Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

No Way! She should never have left him behind. I am disappointed in that particular decision. Hasn't she learned anything? NEVER trust the Council of Wankers. She better do something fast or she'll have no Spike in her future.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2009 - 01:12 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

Spike telling Buffy to look up Angel? oh Spike if you only knew.. Things sure are different.. And I loved it, by the way :)
What will Angus do now? Try to stake them.. and make Buffy furious? or what..
Looking forward to reading more. And I thoroughly enjoyed the update :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 - 01:21 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

It was so sweet that Spike and Buffy reached out to each other in their sleep. :D And the bit with toad was very clever. Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 - 12:59 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

there's something romantic about the atmosphere of this story. I don't mean the obvious spuffy one, but the general tone. I think I'm even picturing sepia tones.I like Valerie and her toad, something very HPish about it, it's nice. I like your extra characters, they're threshed out and distinct.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 - 09:26 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

I smell trouble on its way for the council....loed the update, more please

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 - 06:34 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

Ah update - hopefully the cliffhanger will be solved now.
*read on* LOL you have another one. This Angus Rae sounds like the type of staking first and asking questions later. But if he would listen Buffy would have a chance now to go back.
Looking forward to find out what happens now.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/22/2009 - 05:36 pm Title: Chp 20 Safe and Sound?

This is such an original story--which is pretty tough to come by these days :-). I absolutely love the character development and storyline. It is an amazing story and I'm really looking forward to hearing more.

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2009 - 07:33 pm Title: Chp 19

Okay, on a happy note, I liked this chapter rather a lot. The whole plane crash and Buffy desperately trying to get Spike out before the sun rises, he telling her to go... okay maybe a tiny little bit cliche, but still rather dramatic and romantic and I liked the way you wrote Spike a lot.

I gather Joy is still alive and send that message. Maybe one can really put her abandoning her kid down too madness through grief.

I wonder what circumstances have changed since Spike departed in England, and if Dru really is still alive.

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2009 - 06:47 pm Title: Chp 17 Trapped

I've been enjoying this story so far, but there are rather a few things bothering me with this chapter. First, the whole plan of the Resistance. They are attacking the Chateau just for the hell of it? That's rather unrealistic and not what the Resistance was about. They would sabotage, they were quite sneaky, they didn't just attack and risk their lifes if there wasn't even something to be gained. I know this is not your main focus, but I have always been very interested in the time of Nazi Germany and the Second World War, and it bugs me when authors take it as a back ground to a story and then handle it sloppy. The second thing is, that Joy just gave away her baby to go and die a useless death next to her dead husband. Might sound romantic when you are fourteen, but it isn't. The man she loved is dead, but there is still her daughter, the only thing she has left from him, and she just walks away, even while her child is still in the danger zone!
I got the feeling you threw character motivation to the wind and just went ahead because you wanted a) the Resistance plot device to end, maybe biting of more than you could chew, andb) Buffy and Spike with a baby. But you could have achieved that rather easily by giving them a proper plan and motivation to attack and letting Joy fall in the fight right away. The way you did it it felt sloppy.

Sorry if this sounds harsh, like I said I enjoyed it so far, but it's all the more disappointing when an author takes such short cuts.

Author's Response: Sorry you were unhappy about this chapter. In my opinion, I have taken no short cuts at all with the plot, and I certainly didn't get rid of the Resistance link because I had "bitten off more than I could chew". I think, perhaps, you were missing the whole point - I see that English is not your first language. Buffy is on the outside of this - she admits it - she is not the one making the plan, putting the plan into action or even told what lies behind the plan! There are some VIPs in the Chateau and the Resistance, for their own reasons that Buffy does not know, attack them. It would make a nonsense of the story if Buffy was told what was going on. I hoped I had made it clear that this is Joy Slayer's battle, not Buffy's. She is an onlooker and hates it. She feels detached and as if, I think I say, she is watching a TV movie. As for Joy giving away Aurora - I think she asks Buffy to take her to England and keep her safe. Lots of small children and babies were smuggled out of France at that time. All Pierre's family have been shot and Joy is still a Slayer with a mission. Canon tells us quite clearly about Slayers with children (ie.Robin) and missions. Unfortunately, Aurora is too small to be left behind a handy bush while her mother fights! Luckily you will discover in the next few chapters that the last thing I want to do is involve Buffy with Aurora. This is NOT a Buffy and Spike with a baby story. But glad you are enjoying some of the story. It's always interesting to have the readers' views.

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 06:08 pm Title: Chp 19

I read all the chapters so far. And I'm defenetly liking this story :)
Spike is Spike with or without the chip is just as it should be.
And the Counsil.. nothing good can happen there..
And now they have a baby to take care of.. after they they all find some shelter.
Hope you will continue with this.

Author's Response: Delighted you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 05:52 pm Title: Chp 19

Yikes, this chapter was full of danger and intrigue. Between the crash, caring for Aurora, Spike's dangerous predicament and the ploting Watchers Spike and Buffy certainly have their hands full. *bites nails* Great update as always!

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