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Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2009 - 06:36 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Hi! Just catching up on the story. Loved the break out and your snarky Spike in this chapter!

Now, two things that were a little 'Huh?' for me. First, why would Buffy remember Spike when they had first met? In the string of events that was before she went to France. Why would Buffy grow up with memories of future Buffy? That way it also doesn't make much sense that she needs to forget. Secondly, it is understandable that spike needs to forget, since he will have his formerly 'first' encounter with Buffy in the future and that future coould be changed if he remembers. But it seems to be rather complicated to send Spike to France, have him have sex with a Slayer and take part of a charm originally meant to take Buffy home just to wipe his memory. Just remember how Willow did wipe a lot of memory with a simple spell in Tabula Rasa, lol. For the witch in residence that should be no problem, should it? I know that you probably have future plot points depending on it, but it made me frown because it seemed forced and it might have beeen better to look for another explanation.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2009 - 03:37 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

Ack! OMG! I can hear the impending explosion of that Chateau from THIS side of time and the Atlantic!!!
You've got Buffy's characterization, even her thinking 'voice', spot on. Spike's too. Love the comment about her lacy bits (sez the chick who actually owns several items or original WW2 era ladies underthings (including a pair of tap-pantyish styled knickers made from embroidered hankies (3 of them put together by hand; the motto was repair, re-use, recycle, I think)) AND a very sturdy all-in-one,
some quite scary and quite long knickers, & a near
ly---nearly---normal-looking but non-stretchy silk/satin bra that comes nearly to the bottom of my ribcage)!!!
Buffy in some "Land Girl" togs is not something I
ever thought to see. At least she didn't have to don the 'Wellies' to wear with them. I could just SEE Spike lounging languidly against that door leering lecherously (don't try to say that fast) at Buffy dressing on the fly.
I'm glad you brought in the (pre-)Initiative Experiments -with-the-Nazis. Is Buffy gonna spill a few beans about 'em (about the chip even?) to Spike? Why--gasp!--that might change the future! (Of course, god forbid he avoided a chip in his, by it...) Do I hear a 'heads up' warning in his future, re: AYCE Free Virgin's blood party given by said Nazis? Might even be what places him in the right place, right time... arggggh...am giving myself a headache now! (I'm still of the opinion that Spike would have thought it a lovely game to play 'bait-the-Nazis', leading them on a Merry Chase over half of Europe!)
I can't say it enough, LH, I luvs this fic, and want more Always! Loves all your li'l details of the time, too. (the *sliver* of soap...) You been watching re-runs of 1940's House or something?
And somehow, I'd bet Buffy's gonna be seeing that locket all over again (well, of course, since she is now pre-'80's-01... gah---headache returning!---and will go on to be born, be a teen, and have it given to her, technically... but somehow I'm betting it comes down thru the family somehow (again?) to Joyce, and then her (then BACK to Aurora, then... then..ack!) What was that line in Star Trek IV about the beauty of hocking something in one time being loving it all over again in your own (later) ???
Anyway, off to scrounge some aspirin, and here's a couple for you too! ('cos if I'm getting a headache reading & thinking about it, I can only imagine your headache from writing this time traveling stuff!)
~~Kara

Reviewer: elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2009 - 07:11 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

so, when buffy goes back, Spike will remember what happened?? great story plase write more!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2009 - 03:01 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

Henry is a hoot... lol! I also liked Buffy's little talk with Spike. And I'm loving that Buffy's adventure is going to continue. :D Great chapter, and have a fun holiday!

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 08:34 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

Another great chapter.
Darn right she just can't shallow the cahrm and go home. lol.
And I love how in stride Spike took the whole story...and that the things he needed her to reapeat were things about his appearence. Why am I blond? I dunno Spike., maybe 'cuz you look hot as a blonde. lol
Anyway, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 10:24 am Title: Chp 25 Lies

I love Spike.. "“Why would it be blond?” Other he gets but not his hair color.. and "It explains you being weird" nice and funny :D

And Walsh? I see more adventures for them in France..

Loved the update :)

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 07:49 am Title: Chp 25 Lies

Oh this is a beautiful chapter...with the intimate yet funny conversation between spike and buffy. It's so much fun to read spike's internal monologue about buffy's revelations. And I love your buffy, she's kind.

Reviewer: Old Time Fan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2009 - 03:10 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Yeah, Spike was the one who could have killed Buffy at any time during the early encounters. She only survived because of interuptions, first of which was of course Joyce giving Spike's noggin a floggin with an axe just before he ended her with a giant sized wooden support beam.

Reviewer: Eddam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 03:09 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

I whoop of joy every time you update this fic. I've been following it from the beginning. Great update, as always. And can I just say I just love Henry the toad? He's just precious! :p

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2009 - 03:03 pm Title: Chp 25 Lies

So Spike has a hard time to believe, huh?
I forgot about the locket; I wonder when (in time) Buffy will see it again.
Professor Walsh? That was unexpected. So the Professor is longer 'in the game' than I thought. Seems the vampires will get saved after all. Maybe including Joy.
Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

truth's out now! how will Spike react? A journey back to France, well hopefully it will be easier than when they vame to England..
Loved the update :)

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 08:11 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Ok, a chance for things to go the way they were.. hmmm I think I take Spikes side.. Magic always has consequences.. interesting how thay have to be connected for it to work..

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 08:00 pm Title: Chp 22 Prisoners

awww.. poor Spike. But hey, at least he's back with Buffy.
Now thhe question is can Monroe be trusted?

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2009 - 07:50 pm Title: Chp 21 Promises, Promises

I'm worried.. The Council is never good news..
And Spike? I do hope Buffy will manage to get back to him..

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

Part of your code vanished, your banner isn't showing.
Now to the chapter. :)
Buffy has her own head, the Council or the Colonel isn't used to it.
So Spike knows the truth now; he knows that Buffy trusts him when he has given his word. Looking forward to out if he will believe her.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2009 - 11:02 am Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

Sorry I've fallen behind with the reviews, I've been a bit busy lately and only just had a chance to catch up with the latest updates! Anyway... I'm beginning to think it wasn't getting Joy out of France that was so important, but the rescue of young Aurora... which means Dawn...
So they have to go back to France... then have sex (YAY!) before Buffy can get home. I wonder what she'll remember...

More please....

Author's Response: Thank you for taking such a keen interest! The plot is beginning to unravel. Hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2009 - 07:26 am Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

Spike and Buffy's meeting with Col. Monroe, Valerie and Henry certainly was interesting. And so was Buffy's talk with Spike. Loved the update!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2009 - 02:10 am Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

Shoot! Now I have to wait for Spike's comment on the reveal. I can just picture his face! I'm so enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Some people think Spike is being a little childish, but then he is 60 years younger in his story!

Reviewer: Niori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2009 - 06:15 am Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

This is a really great story. Can't wait to see Spike's reaction next chapter!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2009 - 10:16 pm Title: Chp 24 The Big Secret

HENRY! Love the frog. It's the best original character yet.

" Buffy sat down on the edge of the bed, stroking Henry’s head as he jumped into her lap. "

Hehe, I can see it now; The Cuddle Craving Toad. Cuteness. And how shocked is Spike gonna be? Blowing a gasket or zombie-stare? :D Update missy! Update soon! And include Henry if you can. (perhaps a travel through time for the little one?)

Author's Response: I have to be careful or otherwise Henry will take over the story. He is determined to scene steal whenever he can! Glad you are still enjoying the story.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2009 - 06:36 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Figures Spike would automatically pick up on the sex part... lol! Loved the chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: anne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Ha! Classic!

"For some weird reason, the witch wants us to have sex!"

Mwaha. It's been done and done again in spuffy fanfic, yet you can't ever get tired of it, can you. I am sooo looking forward to THAT scene. I just know that you are going to rock it.

Sad that Buffy's going home. Can't she stay with snarky Spike some more? He's just so funny and angst-free (mostly). Loving this story and crossing my fingers for an early update. *wink*

/annie

(and also, the toad? how random was that. Loves'it)


Author's Response: I know it's been done before, but this time, if it happens! it will be because they want to! Glad you love Henry! He is my favourite.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 07:48 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

love spike's sassy sarcastic self..and you write a lovely buffy, not so cruel, haha, and well licks lips in anticipation of next chappie...this story is a great ride...

Author's Response: Thank you! it's such fun top write.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 06:13 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

Well no problem with the connection, only with the admission to their benefactors. Will Spike keep their sexual liason a secret or blab that they have jumped that hurdle? Also, since the fate of the world depended on Buffy making a journey to her past, does their destiny hinge on their her influence on events that tie into their mutual future? Seems like a big ordeal to endure to just to fail at returning the current slayer of the time. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your interesting comments. I hope the final chapter, which will be soon, will explain everything! Laughs hysterically and runs away to hide!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2009 - 05:59 am Title: Chp 23 Enough for Two?

“She killed three men!”

“That’s my girl!” Spike beamed round the room and then fell silent as he realised his glee wasn’t being reciprocated. “Well, I mean, I’m sorry and all that – No, I’m sodding not! Dru’s a vampire. It’s what we do." Ah, classic Spike! Lovely. :)

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Have just updated next chp.

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