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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2008 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Four

Talk about a tough crowd to be around, poor Buffy didn't really have much of an adjustment as compared to a hit over the head with an orgy club.



Author's Response: Yeah, this whole fic is kind of loopy. Think that's why I'm having so much difficulty working on it. I relate to my other WIPs a lot more. I'll get back to this one at some point, though. Thanks for the comments! :)

Reviewer: jatehtrnj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2008 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter Four

i reall loed this chap can't wait to read the next chapter

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter Four

Guess it was a bit much for Buffy to take in all at once! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: A bit much indeed! Lots of misbehaving going on. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 05:10 pm Title: Chapter Four

This is a very interesting story. I love the different take on the storyline. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! I'm definitely having a strange experience writing it. Hope you continue to like where I take the storyline. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter Four

Oh I'm definitely interested! You have me all kinds of intrigued. :D The vampires with a human Buffy - plus, I'm curious about what Angelus did to Spike (again). Please, more more more! ^^

Author's Response: I'll try my best! I have to get through some stressful life stuff, so I can write. Anxiety seems to make writing extremely difficult for me. Hopefully, I'll just suck it up and get over it soon. :p Thanks so much for the review! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter Four

Well it's a tremendous difference (big difference) to be asked to spent more time with one's friends or oneself :) I don't think Buffy cares about the others much after how they are behaving towards her.
And Spike isn't dumb, he noticed at once that the others must have done something to chase her away. And he's not pleased :) Points for Buffy.
But on the other hand Spike seems to have plans on his own with Buffy. Plans that maybe aren't good for her.

Author's Response: Spike definitely has plans. Hope you guys enjoy the storyline when his motives begin to be revealed. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter Four

Gotta say I breathed a sigh of relief when Buffy went home. Everything surrounding Spike is so darkish, and intriguing in a creepy kind of way. Can't wait to learn more about what he's up to... Spike and Buffy's next date should be interesting. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've been under some intense stress lately. It's gotten way worse in the last few days, and it's made it really difficult to write. I'm sort of one big ball 'o' anxiety. I really appreciate the encouragement from you guys. I hope it will help me get to typing soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 07:00 am Title: Chapter Four

Very interested in you coninuing. This just gets better and better. Waiting eagerly for more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it has your interest! It's certainly a peculiar story. Hopefully, it won't take me too long to update again. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 06:35 am Title: Chapter Four

Poor innocent Buffy! I hope Sunday goes better. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: Bee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 01:35 am Title: Chapter Four

Yes yes, you must write more. In fact: I command thee. ;)

Can't wait to see where you're going with this...I haven't decided if I like this one or "Poison" best yet so update away please?

Author's Response: Glad you're liking the story! I'll try my best not to take too long between updates. Lots of craziness going on right now in Pandoraville! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Glad you're reading Poison too! :)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Four

Double Ohhhhhhhh!!! I know, I know....not wordy girl here. ;)

Author's Response: Some crazy stuff is amiss! And Spike is pissed! Hmm....that kinda rhymed. :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Four

I like the premise of this story and Buffy's background and how it is explained. I'm not sure Buffy's behavior is very realistic or reasonable, though. I'd try to give more sentences into her thought processes and why she is deciding to be around Spike, even feeling a chill or foreboding and then pushing it away instead of her wandering through whatever actions you want her to be in without motive or thoughts, or else making it more clear if her mind is hazed or being guided by a thrall. Also, I'm not sure if you were talking about rape in the earlier part of this chapter or about Spike taking blood whether she was willing or not.
I'm looking forward to finding out more about what Spike wants from Buffy and what the relationship between Angelus, Darla, Drusilla, and William is in this universe.

Author's Response: Yeah, I admit I've kind of blanked out on this story a bit. I am keeping a lot intentionally vague as what is obvious to all of us, of course, regarding some of the characters is not yet obvious to Buffy. As far as Spike taking what he wants whether she's willing or not, I think he pretty much means anything he wants, sex and blood most likely included given his nature and his interest in her. I appreciate all of your comments! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Four

OMG, I LOVE ROUGH SPIKE, THOUGH HE BETTER NOT DO ANYTHING UNTIL SHES WILLING!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that updated. i CANT believe that she saw them doing that and i wonder wat he means by "not again", nothing better happen to her. i really hope that they get closer and that he protects her and actually cares for her not just uses her. also i hope that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. THANX

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it. Honestly, I like it when Spike gets a little rough sometimes myself, and I think that's sort of this Spike's nature. I'll try to update faster than last time, but I have some crazy stuff going on with work, so we'll see. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter Four

Hmmm, I don't know Pandie, i'm not liking spike to much in this fic right now . I 'm intrigued by it thiugh and will read more , but I certainly don't like the freak trio, they make me feel ill. Glad Buffy took off , let's see what happens sunday at dinner, update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, but you don't completely hate him either, right? :) The dynamic is sort of complicated. I will admit, this is definitely the least lovable of my Spikes so far. We'll have to wait and see what's he's up to. The freak trio makes me pretty ill too. I just feel compelled to write them so sickeningly *gag*. Hope you like where I go with it, though! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: jenno Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Four

And another gem from Pandora - can't Spike just kill Angelus and get it over with? :-) Looking forward to the update!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I fought with this chapter a bunch. Finally, I just couldn't do it anymore, so I went with what I had. I think Poison has taken over my mind! It made it hard to focus on this fic, but I really wanted to get the ball rolling again. Thanks again! :)

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