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Reviewer: Shadow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 08:52 am Title: chapter 4

Spike is a little slow on the uptake, isnt he?

Good thing he has the ring, I can see Xander and Giles getting all stake-happy!

Now go in there Spike and get Buffy back!


MORE!


Author's Response: very slow on the uptake would be more like it...more soon

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 12:24 am Title: chapter 3

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thank you more soon

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2008 - 12:13 am Title: chapter 3

you were right , this is better , now I feel like i'm reading a story, really liking it too. Update again soon.

Author's Response: thank you, i just couldn't get that chapter to flow...but when i have time i will redo it i hope

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 08:52 pm Title: chapter 3

Magical coma? So Buffy isn't dead. More like Sleeping Beauty. This story did remind me of it earlier but I thought Buffy was dead and that didn't fit.
Ah you mean the prototype of the fairytale? I only read the one for children but I know there is another book (like the adult version). Good then that Buffy was pregnant before, huh? Because that means that Spike can get her pregnant. But to wait nine month?
~ Looking forward to how this is playing out.

Author's Response: glad you liked, and yes the original fairy tale is very gory... more soon

Reviewer: Jon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: chapter 3

Love it more and soon please!!

Author's Response: with pleasure:) glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 01:59 pm Title: chapter 3

OMG I am loving this story more and more. That whole conversation with Joyce was so good . Loved Spike confusing Sleeping Beauty with Snow White .
And this line ......You want some boy toy to shag the slayer? And I ..what, watch? Give him some pointers? Hold her down if he's not man enough for the job? ROTFLMAO ... That was priceless!!

More soon please can't wait for next chappie.

Author's Response: so glad you are enjoying. i was worried about posting this story, my beta didn't like it, but it seems to have struck a good note. more soon

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 10:54 am Title: chapter 3

Another amazing chapter luv, I am totally hooked! Old fairy tales are all sorts of messed up, we had to study them at school. Disney make them look pretty with bows and candy.
*shakes fist* Damn Andrew! Grr...

Author's Response: the original tales are bloody and full of gore and torture, just up Spike's street:) more soon

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 10:10 am Title: chapter 3

Go Joyce!! Spike really needs to listen to her and stop thinking the worst. And what is Merrick's role. More soon please.

Author's Response: spike's been trained to think the worst:) more soon thanks for the review

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 07:00 am Title: chapter 2

I absolutely love the story so far. Please update soon.

Author's Response: updated, updated...I have written a couple of chapters ahead so will post daily hopefully

Reviewer: _3xy_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 03:21 am Title: chapter 2

Interesting. Buffy's dead and the slayers have lost their strengths. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: glad you liked and thanks for the review

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 02:34 am Title: chapter 2

What an intense chapter! I hope Merrick and Joyce can help Spike save Buffy. *sits on the edge of seat nervously*

Author's Response: glad you liked it more on its way

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2008 - 12:33 am Title: chapter 2

Hmm , getting very interesting. The story idea is good , but i can't help noticing the lack of dialogue in your story , is it meant to be a narrative without an actual narrator , because you seem to be telling the story instead .

Author's Response: yep, that chapter the dialogue just wouldn't come..it refused, however my muse played nicer with the later ones

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 10:43 pm Title: chapter 2

Buffy is already dead. How will Merrick be able to help?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: and dead counts how in BTVS world? :) more very soon

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 10:32 pm Title: chapter 2

Nice twists - really original.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 09:14 pm Title: chapter 2

WOW another really good chapter, glad they realized how much they hurt Buffy , with their so called "good intentions" Good for Faith in standing up to protect her baby, she won't let what happened to Buffy happen to her.
OMG , so happy that Spike survived and is being helped by Joyce and Merrick YAY !!

Hopefully now he'll be able to help Buffy ...

Author's Response: thanks for the review and yes they kept hurting buffy more and more without meaning to, comes of seeing her as less than them:) more soon

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 08:56 pm Title: chapter 2

Unexpected that all the other slayers (with one exception) lost her powers. Things gotten worse indeed.
But Spike is alive; didn't expect that after the summary. Hopefully he can help. And is willing to.

Author's Response: all the potentials, the ones taht were given thier powers through the scyth have lost tehm again, willow really should be more careful with her spells

Reviewer: _3xy_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 02:18 pm Title: chapter 1

Great beginning. It was sad; heart breaking. Which means I loved it. Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: more very soon, glad you liked it

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 01:32 pm Title: chapter 1

Hmm...thought D'H said no more slayers would be called...

Waiting to see if she pulled one over on him or ??

Author's Response: no more slayers:) poor giles,

Reviewer: Kings of Mercia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 08:24 am Title: chapter 1

Wow babe! Looking forward to more - um, never mind the housework, WRITE - Tell Hrolf WE said!!!

Author's Response: hrolf says you are more than welcome to send a house kepper over if you would like:) glad you enjoyed. more soon

Reviewer: LoobyLoo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 - 08:22 am Title: chapter 1

Can't wait to see where you take this!! More please and soon.

Author's Response: more on its way. glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 09:52 pm Title: chapter 1

A stunning opener. Charming Scoobies taking care of their Buffy! I always hated how they turned on her and threw her out of her home and then next thing they are all best friends like it never happened. Things could well have gone from bad to worse. And now there's divine intervention!! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: more sdoon and i'm glad it caugt your imagination

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 09:00 pm Title: chapter 1

Poor Buffy! Could strangle those scoobies! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: strangle away. i never did forgive them for the sunnydale fiasco

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 07:08 pm Title: chapter 1

This story starts really bad, Spuffy-wise ~ with Buffy having lost a baby and Spike dead (says the summary) so I hope it can only get better.
It's a really bad start; nobody seems to respect Buffy('s feelings). No wonder she got so desperate.
And really desperate is right. Didn't expect her to try to kill herself.
Looking forward to see how you fix that.

Author's Response: yep, the only way is up from here:) there will only be about 10 chapters, so not long to wait

Reviewer: Pandora Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 06:44 pm Title: chapter 1

Excellent writing as always! I love an angsty ride. Very curious to read what happens next. The end of this chapter was quite provocative! My first review ever! *grin*

Author's Response: thanks for your first review, more soon

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2008 - 06:30 pm Title: chapter 1

OMG this was so sad , but so frickin' good ! The Scoobies and Dawn are just horrible, they didn't learn anything at all that last year in SunnyD. POOR BUFFY , losing her baby and nobody giving a damn ,everybody telling her to get over it, no wonder she wants to end it all.

More soon , can't wait to see what happpens !

Is Spike dead , cause I didn't see it mentioned?

Author's Response: spike wasn't mentioned deliberatly and glad you liked, more soon

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