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Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2010 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-three

great chapter, and glad you're back...more please

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2010 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-three

Waiting to see what happens when "they" see Buffy and Spike.. I don't have good feelings about it .. They are not going to be able to accept any changes.. especially about Spike..

And love the comment about the chip and Xander..

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Thanks for updating this entertaining and emotional story. I like that it was hope that has freed these two. I had wondered about the bite and Spike's possessive words, but didn't realize it was the key that unlocked the gateway out of Buffy's cell. Here's hoping that there aren't more obstacles in their path.

Of course Buffy wouldn't be feeling pity. Hearing how Spike's suffered would push her into righteous anger for both their sakes. Larry's been screwing with them both and it's fun and funny for him. I'd forgotten what a nasty piece of work Larry was. He won't be missed.

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2010 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Love how you reminded us of the Kenny story. Love how you had Buffy get so mad that she kicked Larry's ass. Loved how noble Spike was being and her knowing his sacrifices. Can't wait to read how they get back to Sunnydale and beyond.

Reviewer: Tora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2010 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

OH MY GOD! I'm so in love with this fic! Every chapter is beautifully written and so moving, I don't know what to dowith myself. The wait is always worth it. Keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: Waldeskoenigen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Hi. Just a quick note to say that, however long it take you to post, it's worth it. I read very few new stories these days - just stick to the long-running, high quality stuff. And this is a really good story. Thanks for persevering!

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

So happy to see this updated! This story is the only reason I still check this site. Again, your writing does not disappoint. I do hope that you are able to finish it.

Congrats on your publications!

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Yay! Love this story...so pleased to see an update :o)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

So hope was the key. Or better - blood. It sounded like a claim, back then. Seems in Hell it counts as one.
Ah Larry was mean, telling all about Spike's trials. He had his fun. I'm glad I was right about Buffy's feelings though, she wasn't disgusted of Spike.
The Slayer is back. :D
~ Loved to read the update - worth the wait.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Bravo, Holly. Good chapter, no sign of your writer's block because, well, there was Buffy and there was Spike. Even bad ol' Larry was just as he was at the beginning. And at the last? There was Buffy, in true Slayer form: put emotions and thoughts away for later because NOW there is a demon to see to .......

And in so doing, Buffy effortlessly picked up that long-forgotten mantle of bravery and determination and clears away the obstruction in front of herself and her vampire.

Excellent. Thank you.

Reviewer: Gentleviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 10:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty-two

I hadn't forgotten this story and was so pleased to see a new chapter. It has been and still is a great story and I hope you are able to continue.

Reviewer: pangsofblue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 03:21 am Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Hi, I just wanted to say that I think you are an amazingly tallented writer. I am SO glad you are back to writing. This is by FAR one of my top 5 Favorite stories! Thank so much for sharing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2010 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Thirty-two

I was so excited to see that you had updated! I love this story and how you present it. I'm patiently waiting for our duo to see the real world again... So I hope all of our reviews are feeding your muse!

Reviewer: TJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

I lit up as soon as I saw that you had posted. I was so happy to see an update and it was so worth the wait. Gorgeous storytelling. :)

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

so glad you posted again. I love this story & its another great chapter. More please & soon

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Well, guess Larry has lost his job.. pissed off a slayer.. "Hope"

Thank you.. enjoyed. And now Buffy knows what Spike went through but the last thing he wants is to have her pity..

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2010 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-two

Squeeee!! I've been waiting so long and happily, you're back with us. You really CAN write. Have Spike eat your depression and writer's block.

Reviewer: Catrine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/21/2010 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-one


I've read through this whole story today and... WOW!!! What a story!! The plot is incredible,the writing so brilliantly good (I'm envious of how good a writer u are) and the portraying of Spike and Buffy is wonderful. I really hope there will be an update soon. The cliffhanger u just ended with is almost unbearable. I just want them to get back up.

What more is there to say other then; I loved it!!:)

Reviewer: Rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2009 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-one

Glad to see it didn't take Buffy too long to figure out what was going on. 'Hope,' ah, so simple, so pure. The run for their lives was nice and exciting, and now a face off with Larry! Great job, and looking forward to seeing the next step out of hell!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Thirty-one

Only just found this story & spent about a week getting up to date. Lovin it! So well written & full of great description especially the long wait that Spike endured-I really felt it. Hope you post again before Christmas but if not have a very happy one

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2009 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-one

Absolutely addicted to this story!!!!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2009 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Four

Enthralled with this story! I love the mixture of gut wrenching drama and humor. Plus, go Anya. Anytime someone can stick it to Xander and his biases the better.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2009 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter One

Love it!!!!!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2009 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-one

The race from the consuming nothingness was vividly drawn and breath catchingly tense. Buffy just knowing the river would lead nowhere added another level of tension, making me wonder if she were going to balk, missing the opportunity and plunging them even deeper into this hell. When they both emerged on the other side of the river, I let out a breath of relief.

Larry's not really a surprise and I'm sure he has something nasty in mind for these two, but giving Buffy tangible proof that things are changing should make her even more determined to make things change more. This is a real light at the end of the tunnel, and this time I hope it's not an oncoming train.

Thanks for another excellent update in this entertaining and emotional story.

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2009 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-one

Oh My God!!! They are so close!!! I actually squealed and scared my flatmates to death because of this cliff hanger! End my suffering soon, I beg of thee. Utterly, beautifully, heart wrenchingly brilliant as always. Thank you so much!

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