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Reviewer: SMac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I keep reading the title as 'Like Mice in a Cocktail' and it gives me pause. LOL Anyway, I haven't read this yet as I'm waiting for it to get to some length first (cuz that's how I like em) but the premise is fascinating and I really am looking forward to reading it then. So please keep going with it as I'm lurking here and want to read it later. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I will read here then; had added the chapters to my LJ memories to read :)
Wow, things have definitely changed again. The whole world is different. And Spike as a police officer. Suits him, a white hat even if would have denied when being younger to be that.
Sounds as if the vampire there looks indeed a lot like Buffy.
~ Good start :) Looking forward to the rest.

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I just posted the second chapter. I hope you will read and let me know what you think:)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: serinah Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2008 - 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

i like the beginning. futuristic is good, i'm curious where are you heading with the plot. the last sentence is weird though. you don't pass out if you breath. shouldn't the sentence go sth like this - 'If he'd needed to breath, he would have passed out.'?

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