great chapter, can't wait for more!

I love this: bringing his hand to his mouth and breathing into it, making sure that his breath was still minty fresh.

I'm surprised it wasn't Warren trying to steal a purse (to match his fur-lined hand cuffs).

Aw, Spike got drunk.

I wonder if Jenny is gonna realize Mr. Pratt is Spike, could be bad for her if she does. Good update!

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

I never said that Spike is not a man slut in this story. But he is evil in this story or so you made him out to be. So, it isn't like seeing him sleep around with different people is something that is going to make me not like him. Say something like that evil Spike how dare he sleep around. LOL Buffy is a bitch. Buffy is a bitch on the show and maybe some people don't want to admit it but she can be a big bitch. I am not one who thinks Spike can do no wrong. He is a vampire. Well, he is on the show. So, of course Spike can do wrong. I just find that most people think that Buffy can do no wrong. She is the hero so we can't put her in a bad light. If we do we must make sure that Spike comes off as the evil one (seeing red scene). And Spike can do wrong for lots of people because this is another story where Buffy is a good girl (slut but good girl) and where Spike is evil. He falls in love then turns good for her. Probably feeling like he isn't worthy of her but thankful nonetheless that she is with him. I just hope that Spike is careful when he sleeps with her. The little slut has been around and might have something. I laughed when I read that Buffy has to have magic to stay away from Spike. What a terrible weakness for the Hero to have. Oh PornGirl, you are so great that all the guys want. Even though your pussy must be so loose from sleeping around. Yeah, can't wait to see what PornGirl and evil Spike does next. {

Buffy is such a bitch and a hore in this story. Thinking that she is all that. Getting wet at every guy she sees and wanting to fuck them. Buffy it is only the magic that is keeping you from not wanting Spike. You are not all that powerful if you don't have the will power yourself to stay away. How long is Spike going to be the bad guy. Is he going to fall in love with Buffy or should I say Porn Girl the supergirl. Turn to a great guy for her while Buffy plays this supergirl. I do like Buffy but this Buffy gets on my nerves. I really wouldn't mind if Spike got rid of Buffy and went on his evil ways. Buffy always seems to think that she has the advantage.

Author's Response: How is it that Buffy's the whore, and Spike's not? What annoys me is how people always think that Buffy is the bitch, and Spike can do no wrong. He is way worse than her in this story, but if you don't like it, you can just easily stop reading. I'm not forcing anyone.

Cute scene with Buffy and Xander. Buffy's little rant about Will Smith was fun too. :D Good update!

I'm loving this story. Every time I see a 'PG' rating sticker I smile. Keep going with it, can't wait for more.

Poor Angelus. But Warren as a drag queen, hee. And Spike is evil, just not a hateful evil; more like Doctor Evil then Dr No.

This is absolutely hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing after the first chapter. And in the second it got more serious, but it still has the element that just makes is so good. Can't wait for more.

this story just seems to get better and better every time i read it anyway please update soon

Hehe this is just sooo much fun : - )
Dont let anyone who doesnt like it get you down. If they cant take it in the humour for which its meant then thats their problem not yours.
More please.

well, i'm still liking this spike, he's my kind of evil, you're doing a great job with this story.