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Reviewer: Shell Presto Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2009 - 08:01 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Thisis pretty light and fluffy so far, but I'm definitely enjoying it. Wasn't expecting the surprise at the end of Chapter 1, and I'm definitely enjoying the barbs between Spike and Buffy -- very reminiscent of the back and forth from the show before they hooked up, which is something I always miss.

I'd like to say that it bothers me when you describe him putting on a 'punk shirt.' You're not painting a picture there, it could be anything from a ripped shirt to a shirt with a logo, to having safety pins... anything! So please paint us a clearer picture in the future, and I'll keep reading.

Author's Response: Duly noted about the 'punk shirt' thing. Glad you enjoyed the barbs between Spike and Buffy. Those are the most enjoyable things for me to write. I also think the two are most interesting to watch when they hate each other.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/19/2009 - 06:41 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

This made me laugh: “Calm down, Betty. It’s not like I was gonna steal your precious football or anything.”

Actually that’s exactly what his plan was, but she didn’t have to go around basically accusing him of it. That was just plain rude. Spike befriends Dawn and Joyce is hysterical. I 'm enjoying the way he's already getting under Buffy's skin. It's a mutual anti-dmiration fest!

Author's Response: Your good at picking out my favorite lines! This was my favorite one as well! I freakin love you! I love the whole Spike/Dawn/Joyce family bonding thing. It makes me laugh when Spike tries to join the fam.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2009 - 04:40 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Loved the Disney Princess Movie blue jay at the beginning. Looking forward to the bantering.

Author's Response: That's EXACTLY what I was going for in the chapter. So glad you got that LOL

Reviewer: ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2008 - 06:02 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Great story so far. Love that you made Spike a slayer and a jerk. Love it when Spike is a jerk.

Keep writing, keep writing more and often.

cheers.

Ivy

Author's Response: Haha you like when Spike is a jerk? Yea sometimes that can be real entertaining. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: lotsofsun Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2008 - 03:23 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

I'm really, really liking this story - I just read the two chapters right now. Want more! I'm really liking combining a common Human AU plot with canon-y twists to keep it interesting! I'll be def keeping an eye out for this one....

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. It's a huge risk for me cuz its a bit weird and different but I'm glad you'll keep an eye on it. These next coupla weeks I'll be posting much more regularly. Hope you'll stick with it!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2008 - 06:25 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Long time since RL let me have time to visit the spuffyrealm (unfortunately for me). Then the first thing I see is a fresh new - "they hate eachother with welldeserved, hot, lots of ust passion" - (fortunately for me).

This was funny how they both are slayers, mysterious with how that happened, great with the when will this be revealed, not to mention the ever interestin when will they get it on?

Abslolutely enjoyable read. Hope you keep updating often!! (not at all subtle hint ; )

Looking forward to being thoroughly entertained by this.

Author's Response: Oooh, i got a long review! I live for long reviews its embarrassing really. I stay on my computer all day waiting for someone to post a long review on one of my fics :-p Sheesh, you're already interested in the "when will they get it on" aspect? LOL (I am too but i would NEVER admit it. I'm glad you're liking it. Hopefully I won't disappoint.

Reviewer: dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 05:50 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

ohhh i can't wait to see where this fic goes...double slayers :-) loves it! please hurry and update again soon.



Author's Response: LOL double slayers? I like that.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 04:24 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Buffy and Spike are getting off to a bad start! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 06:46 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Great update. Lovely snark. More, please.

Reviewer: KIska12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 03:28 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

I am enjoying the story very much. please continue!!

Reviewer: Teal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 02:49 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

I'm really loving this story. It's very interesting and surprising considering I didn't expect both of them to be slayers. It's also absolutely hilarious. I like the humor in it, harsh and witty! Keep it up. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Aw i got all warm inside reading your review. And not in the sexy way, but in the appreciative, "I'm so flattered" way. I hope you like the next few chapters!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2008 - 02:26 am Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Betty .. LOL

Love the banter..

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 10:19 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

sounds really good so far. keep writing and i'll keep reading.

Reviewer: Aureila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 10:16 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

I'd love to read more of this, it sounds like it will develop into a interesting, and rather entertaining, story. How long will it take before they realise about each other?

Author's Response: I can't tell you that yet! its a secret! A secret that i barely even know :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 09:54 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Oh yes, two slayers, huh?
Well the meeting in real life didn't go so well; loved how Spike teased Buffy though :D
I wonder how long it will take for them to notice the secret of the other.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

Liking the story so far . Boy they really get on each other's nerves but Buffy is really acting bratty *hehe*

Can't wait to see when they find out they're both Slayers. that should be good ! Don't have them hating each other too long , that gets annoying ;)

More soon please !

Author's Response: Eh, well Spike and Buffy can be annoying sometimes...You saw season 6 didn't you? LOL. And I can't wait until they find out about each other either hehe.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 07:53 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

I'm really enjoying this story. Spike and Buffy's interactions had me literally laughing out loud. I can't wait for the next chapter :D .

Author's Response: I'm glad SOMEONE thinks my banter is funny LOL. I'm glad you liked it and I'm happy the chapter made you laugh.

Reviewer: charlotte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 07:22 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

looove it!!!! this is soo good!! keep going!!!

Reviewer: stacy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2008 - 06:31 pm Title: Unfuckable Blonde Girl

i'm still not sure about this one yet, they're both getting on my nerves. i hate when they always take an immediate dislike to each other without getting to know the other person first, and i'm still finding it hard to believe that they're both slayers, buffy seems to be the brat she was when she was first called. i might give one more chapter a chance.

Author's Response: Two Slayers which equates to Two impossibly huge egos. It would get on my nerves as well. You know what I hate even more though? The fics where they fall in love real easy like. I'll try to find a happy medium. I'm glad you're giving it one more chapter before you give up ;)

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