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Reviewer: c Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 10:05 am Title: Realisations.

Being interment with you, Buffy, is for him absolute perfect happiness and he would most defiantly revert back to Angelus.

should be

Being INTIMATE with you, Buffy, is for him absolute perfect happiness and he would most DEFINITELY revert back to Angelus

and

They where mortal enemies.

should be

The were mortal enemies


You need a new beta!!

Reviewer: _3xy_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/21/2009 - 04:41 am Title: Realisations.

This is really interesting. A prophecy saying Buffy needs to mate with a vampire. *giggles* I know who that vamp would be! :D

Two things though, I think by "accent scroll" you meant "ancient scroll" and alli is spelled as ally. But all in all, this is fun. :)

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 06:20 am Title: Realisations.

loved it
can't wait for more

Author's Response: Glad your liking it.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 - 09:46 pm Title: Realisations.

I think you really need to have a close look at your spelling, (eg 'intermet' should be 'intimate' among others) but apart from that, I love the way the story is going!

Author's Response: thanks.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 01:12 pm Title: Realisations.

I can see why Buffy has problems to coming around to have to mate (claim?) with Spike but if there's a prophecy she'll have to do it. Can't see them find a way around it but I let myself get surprised with what they will come up :)

What's an accent scroll BTW? What I've found in my translator makes no sense. (PS - check the chapter for typos - couldn’t’t sounds wrong as alli = ally in the summary.)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and Accent scroll = Prophecy.

Reviewer: colleen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 12:16 pm Title: Realisations.

yay I love these stories, poor buffy, yay spuffy! please update soon, I hate waiting =p

Author's Response: Lol no problem i'm trying to update every 2-3 weeks, glad your enjoying it.

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