Date: 06/12/2009 - 10:05 am Title: Realisations.
Being interment with you, Buffy, is for him absolute perfect happiness and he would most defiantly revert back to Angelus.
should be
Being INTIMATE with you, Buffy, is for him absolute perfect happiness and he would most DEFINITELY revert back to Angelus
and
They where mortal enemies.
should be
The were mortal enemies
You need a new beta!!
Date: 04/21/2009 - 04:41 am Title: Realisations.
This is really interesting. A prophecy saying Buffy needs to mate with a vampire. *giggles* I know who that vamp would be! :D
Two things though, I think by "accent scroll" you meant "ancient scroll" and alli is spelled as ally. But all in all, this is fun. :)
Date: 01/27/2009 - 06:20 am Title: Realisations.
loved it
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Glad your liking it.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 09:46 pm Title: Realisations.
I think you really need to have a close look at your spelling, (eg 'intermet' should be 'intimate' among others) but apart from that, I love the way the story is going!
Author's Response: thanks.
Date: 01/24/2009 - 01:12 pm Title: Realisations.
I can see why Buffy has problems to coming around to have to mate (claim?) with Spike but if there's a prophecy she'll have to do it. Can't see them find a way around it but I let myself get surprised with what they will come up :)
What's an accent scroll BTW? What I've found in my translator makes no sense. (PS - check the chapter for typos - couldn’t’t sounds wrong as alli = ally in the summary.)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and Accent scroll = Prophecy.
Date: 01/24/2009 - 12:16 pm Title: Realisations.
yay I love these stories, poor buffy, yay spuffy! please update soon, I hate waiting =p
Author's Response: Lol no problem i'm trying to update every 2-3 weeks, glad your enjoying it.