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Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2009 - 03:51 am Title: Why would you save me?

Hmmmmm...I like the way you've started to set up this story. It doesn't look like it will be the usual 'Buffy boinks Spike and ends up preggers.' At least, your banner leads me to believe she'll end up being mommified. Sometimes I'll read a few chapters, and if it hasn't grabbed my attention, I won't bother with the story, but I'm going to keep reading this one.

One little pain in the butt, though--your beta needs to take a little more time. You've both missed a few piddly bits, like writing 'interment' instead of intimate, and a few instances of using 'your' instead of 'you're,' but I'm known to be a grammar Nazi.

All in all, I'm enjoying your stary, and looking forward to more!


Author's Response: Your a grammar/spelling natzi but you have spelt story *stary* wrong lol sorry but i couldn't help but point that out. Thanks for pointing out the mistakes i shall take better notice. Also glad your enjoying it so far

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 12:58 pm Title: Why would you save me?

Enjoyed the update :)
And Buffy's question if he would walk her home. Riley is bound to take this the wrong way I fear.... But it was so sweet when Buffy asked him :)

Author's Response: Yeah i want a sweet Buffy in this fic even if she may be a little confused too, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 12:58 am Title: Why would you save me?

yeah, good enjoying it. more please

Author's Response: Glad your liking it, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 05:02 pm Title: Why would you save me?

A very nice chapter. I am glad that you are making Buffy thoughtful. Hopefully she will see the good side of Spike. Too bad Riley is still around. I am not his biggest fan.

Author's Response: No i'm not a Riley fan either.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2009 - 03:22 pm Title: Why would you save me?

Uh, oh. Riley. That actually was a pretty innocent conversation he overheard, but I guess he's a bit paranoid about Buffy's feelings, huh?
Looking forward to next chappie.

Author's Response: Riley has always been a little unsure about his roll in Buffy's life and threatened but men in her life who are stronger then him, so i made him nice and paranoid lol.

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