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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2012 - 02:47 am Title: Forever yours.

This is a great story; I really,really liked it.

It does need some moreediting,as there are a number of mistakes,including your/you're errors,spelling problems (e.g. should be "cocoa," not coco),vocab problems (interment is used when intimate is the correct word),continuity errors (Spike's mom is said to be Annabel at one spot,and Annabelle in another, and they decide on the name Dawn ahead of time,several chapters before her birth,but then come up with the name anew after her birth),among other errors,large and small.

So,with good editing,this fic could be truly great,as thee plot is very enjoyable!

Reviewer: Shay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 06:12 am Title: Forever yours.

Wonderful story. I love stories where Buffy isn't such a bitch to Spike. This was a joy to read.

Reviewer: Christine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2011 - 10:30 am Title: Forever yours.

Wow I loved it this story was even better than I thought it would be... once I started reading it I couldn't stop till I finished it and I have no regrets :D

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2011 - 05:29 pm Title: Forever yours.

Beautiful.. You had me crying at multiple times and the ending put a huge smile on my face. Thank you for writing it, I needed that today. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 11:14 pm Title: Forever yours.

I like Dru's role in Dawn's life - a nice twist.
And a good end. Enjoyed.

Reviewer: amayuscula Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 09:40 am Title: Forever yours.

Thanks for finishing the story. It is really beautiful. I am going to save it in my computer. Now I will be waiting for your other stories.

Reviewer: VETTE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 06:38 am Title: Forever yours.

Loved reading this story, great ending. Really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 04:35 am Title: Forever yours.

I absolutely loved this story! The ending with Buffy and Spike was so sweet. I'm going to miss this story. :(
On the bright side, I can look forward to your WIPs being updated or a new story coming out.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 01:53 am Title: Forever yours.

I loved your story and I am sorry to see it end. It appears everyone had a happy ending. Great job..

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 12:28 am Title: Forever yours.

I love the way Dawn healed Dru and she stayed around to help protect Dawn. Very sweet ending...

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