Date: 12/12/2008 - 03:48 am Title: Chapter One
The Spike and Dru part of part one seemed off but once you got Buffy and Wes talking, then Willow, then Spike again, it was like an ep. of the show. Joan, hee.
Date: 12/10/2008 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter One
Spike finally got his third Slayer, I'm sure he's famous and respected among the vamps now, but I wonder if there is anyone he would be angry to lose besides Drusilla? Love this chapter and hope you update soon!
Author's Response: That's true. He's a real Big Bad, but what does that mean without his Dark Princess? Guess you'll just have to wait and see where the story goes ;) Glad you liked it thus far.
Date: 12/09/2008 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter One
Great beginning! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 12/09/2008 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter One
I really liked the beginning to this fic. I love the set up to have Buffy show her intelligence and skill in trying to frighten or intimidate the Master of Sunnydale's ranks on their home turf and how it was the perfect set up for Spike to notice her first as a hottie and then as a Slayer, and I can't wait to see how he'll respond next time, especially if they fight!
That last bit with Tara, apparently vamped, to track down Willow really hit me hard. Great job.
I know a lot of authors write Dru differently, but you might want to show her having more emotion, even if it is selfish or not related to the story but to a doll tea party or something. I don't know if Spike would be okay with Dru not responding to him at all while he's kissing her and just taking it.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback! Yeah, Dru seemed a little bit preoccupied while Spike was giving her his kisses, didn't she? Don't worry, she gets a little bit more feisty in the next chapter :)
Date: 12/09/2008 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter One
Interesting take, with many possibilities and you're just the girl to write them .....
Author's Response: Ha! Glad you think so. Lovely to see you reading.
Date: 12/09/2008 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter One
Very interesting and unique beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing more of this story.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!