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Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 07:35 pm Title: 4

liked it very much

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 05:02 pm Title: 4

Evil place to end the chapter *cry* Please post more soon.

Author's Response: I know, sorry. :) More is up now. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 03:21 pm Title: 4

Yay for snogging!!!!

Author's Response: Yay! *lol*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:28 pm Title: 4

*sigh* So many hurt that wasn't needed if William had given Buffy a chance to answer / say her part.
I hope she'll explain now and William will believe her.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 02:05 pm Title: 4

Step 2... and hopefully the kiss will let him know..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it, thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: Slayerfest98 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 03:15 am Title: 3

More!!! Oh my gosh this is a great story so far, please update again soon! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 - 01:10 am Title: 3

Arghh!!!! More. Now!

Author's Response: *lol* Your wish is my command. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 - 12:56 am Title: 3

You have me on the edge of my seat! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: 3

This chapter made my spuffy heart ache... they are both so miserable.
Only just the last sentences gave me a bit of hope now.

Author's Response: Well, I promise to fix this so don't worry. You won't even have to wait very long. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 - 09:47 pm Title: 3

Hope..

Enjoying..

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 - 08:24 pm Title: 3

Don't know how I missed this when you posted the first two chapters. I LOVE your stories! This one is looking to be another great one. :-) Looking forward to reading more. Please post soon!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! Hope you'll like what's to come.

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 - 07:59 pm Title: 3

Oh God, they're both miserable. They just have to talk. Please, please have William get away from Dru. At least Buffy isn't with Riley anymore, hopefully it'll stay that way.

More soon please, this is getting really good. =)

Author's Response: I'm very happy you like it so far, thank you!

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 04:12 pm Title: 2

Please update this soon - and please have them end up in the same place!! I love it!

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that, thank you! Next chapter is up, hope you'll like it. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2009 - 01:08 am Title: 2

Too bad Buffy couldn't see what she had in William in the beginning. Now they're both miserable. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: That they are. Hopefully not for long, though. ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: kegan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2009 - 08:43 pm Title: 2

You're very welcome! And my sanity thanks you. It was a geart chapter, although now you've left me with a huge thirst for more. Oh, and I'm not too worried about the Spike/other part as long as it leads to spuffy in the end :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And there will definitely be Spuffy, no question about it. *lol*

Reviewer: veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2009 - 06:10 am Title: 2

another great chapter pet please update again soon

Author's Response: Just did, thank you! :)

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2009 - 02:20 am Title: 2

Oh Pet! A new and instantly addicting story! :D

Author's Response: *lol* I'm very happy you feel that way. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2009 - 01:04 am Title: 2

YAY! I love this story and was very glad to see it updated. I really hope they run into each other and work everything out. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Happy you love it, thank you very much for letting me know!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 10:51 pm Title: 2

Riley is pathetic, as always, and Drusilla's a crazy bitch. Hey, how about getting them together? It would be a perfect match. Sad beginning, seeing as how Buffy is having regrets about how things ended with Spike, and because of her rejection, he got caught in Drusilla's evil claws. I hope he's strong enough to break away from her, him and Buffy just need to sit down and have an actual conversation. It's sad they didn't remain friends. Well, I wasn't too sure about this one, but I trust you, it helps knowing it won't get too dark. I figured you would have pity on us after Healing...lol!

Author's Response: Riley and Dru, eh? Scary thought. *lol* And yeah, this will not be nearly as angsty as Healing, trust me. thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 10:48 pm Title: 2

No you're right - Spike is together with Dru now and so the Spike/other is correct.
Buffy made the right decision though not to marry Riley - without enough love from her side I don't think if would have lasted long. And the break up would have been worse.
William on the other hand has still to decide what he wants.
When the xx/other isn't too bad I think I'll manage it :)

Author's Response: Yay! :) So glad you decided to keep reading. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: 2

OMG what a mess ! Riley needs to go away and Drusilla needs to be slapped! What a bitch. Don't understand why Wiliam let her take such control of his life. =( Just walk away William!

Can't wait for more, it's getting good!

Author's Response: Thank you, more is up. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 06:21 pm Title: 2

Hopefully he's going to see Buffy... and Riley needs to just get over it ... LOL

Enjoying..

Author's Response: I'm so glad you do, thank you!

Reviewer: kegan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 06:02 pm Title: 1

I really wish you'd update this. It's a great beginning. I wouldn't want it to go to waste! Besides it's starting to get annoying to go to this site every single day and find that it hasn't been updated. So for my sanity's sake you really have to update this! :P

Author's Response: Your review really made my muse start cooperating again, thank you! *lol* I'm so happy you like the beginning and I hope you'll like what's to come as well. Thanks again!

Reviewer: kell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2009 - 02:49 pm Title: 1

interesting beginning, i'd love to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you feel that way.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2008 - 04:52 am Title: 1

god, what a bitch, no wonder she was cheated on. i feel so bad for william, i hope he doesn't get too hurt and buffy comes to her senses. i'm not so sure how i feel about this one yet, but i may give one more chapter a chance. it looks like it might be too angsty for me.

Author's Response: It may seem angsty at first but I promise it won't be too bad. Hope you decide to give next chap a chance. Thanks for reviewing!

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